Peter: > Nits/editorial comments: > > Page 2, section 1, 2nd paragraph, last sentence: change "associate" to > "associated".
Done. > Page 4, 1st NEW block, 4th sentence: insert "the" before "signedAttrs field". Fixed. > Page 5, section 3.5, 2nd paragraph, 1st sentence: insert "the" before "same > digest". Done. > Page 5, section 4 title: change "Recommend" to "Recommended" for parallel > construction with the section 3 title. Okay, done. > Page 6, ADD block: delete the first "known". Based on another comment, I have reworded this to say: While there are no known algorithm substitution attacks today, the inclusion of the algorithm identifiers used by the originator as a signed attribute or an authenticated attribute makes such an attack significantly more difficult. > Page 6, section 6, 3rd paragraph, 5th sentence: change "signalling" to > "signaling". Done. Thanks for the careful review. Russ _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
