Thank you, Mohit, Stephen, and Alyssa! On Wed, Jan 20, 2021 at 2:34 PM Alissa Cooper <[email protected]> wrote:
> Mohit, thanks for your review. Stephen, thanks for your response. I > entered a Yes ballot. > > Alissa > > On Nov 25, 2020, at 6:47 AM, Stephen Farrell <[email protected]> > wrote: > > > > On 25/11/2020 11:46, Mohit Sethi via Datatracker wrote: > > Reviewer: Mohit Sethi > Review result: Ready > > > Thanks. Will look at those nits when next editing. > > Cheers, > S. > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed > by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just > like any other last call comments. > For more information, please see the FAQ at > <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. > Document: draft-ietf-tls-oldversions-deprecate-09 > Reviewer: Mohit Sethi > Review Date: 2020-11-25 > IETF LC End Date: 2020-11-30 > IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat > Summary: This document deprecates older versions of TLS and DTLS. It also > updates many RFCs that normatively refer to the older TLS/DTLS versions. > Major issues: None > Minor issues: None > Nits/editorial comments: In section 1.1, typo in "waas defined to detect". > Most references to RFCs are of the form "[RFC7507]". Can we change "RFC > 7457 > [RFC7457]" to "[RFC7457]" for uniformity. Similarly, perhaps you could > change > "RFC5246 [RFC5246]" and "RFC4346 [RFC4346]" to "[RFC5246]" and "[RFC4346]". > In section 2 "NIST for example have provided " should be "..has > provided...". > In section 6 "this document is called out specifically to update text > implementing the deprecation recommendations of this document." I was > initially confused with the repeated usage of "this". Perhaps it would > help to > be more explicit. > > <OpenPGP_0x5AB2FAF17B172BEA.asc> > _______________________________________________ > Gen-art mailing list > [email protected] > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art > > > -- Best regards, Kathleen
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