Thanks a lot Stewart for the comments. Please see inline below how we have addressed them in version -08.
On Thu, Oct 6, 2022 at 8:24 PM Stewart Bryant via Datatracker < [email protected]> wrote: > Reviewer: Stewart Bryant > Review result: Ready > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed > by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just > like any other last call comments. > > For more information, please see the FAQ at > > <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. > > Document: draft-ietf-raw-use-cases-07 > Reviewer: Stewart Bryant > Review Date: 2022-10-06 > IETF LC End Date: 2022-10-06 > IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat > > Summary: > > A well written document ready for publication, but note the question on > whether > the aero terminology is correct and the comment on haptics. > > Major issues: > None > > Minor issues: > Different safety levels need to be supported, from extremely safety > critical ones requiring low latency, such as a WAKE warning - a > warning that two aircraft come dangerously close to each other > SB> Is this term correct? > SB> Aircraft proximity is, I think, an AIRPROX event. WAKE I thought > applied to > the vortex trails whereby a large aircraft disturbs the air in a way that > makes > it unsafe for a smaller aircraft to fly through. It would be useful if an > aero > specialist validated the term. > [Carlos] That section was contributed by the LDACS experts, so I trust this should be OK. In any case, I take the opportunity to request them to check this. > > SB> In all the human interaction examples, I am surprised there is no > mention > of haptics. A latency failure in a haptic experience can make the > participant > feel nauseous and vomit. > [Carlos] Thanks, I have added a sentence to highlight this. Thanks, Carlos > > Nits/editorial comments: > None > > >
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