Thanks Roni On Fri, 7 Oct 2022 at 8:51 Roni Even via Datatracker <[email protected]> wrote:
> Reviewer: Roni Even > Review result: Ready with Nits > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed > by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just > like any other last call comments. > > For more information, please see the FAQ at > > <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. > > Document: draft-ietf-lsr-isis-flood-reflection-?? > Reviewer: Roni Even > Review Date: 2022-10-06 > IETF LC End Date: 2022-10-10 > IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat > > Summary: > The documents is ready for publication as an experimental RFC with nits > > Major issues: > > Minor issues: > > Nits/editorial comments: > 1. in sections 4.2 and 4.4 I think that the length field is always 5. so > why > not specify this value. 2.In section 7 second paragraph I am not sure what > is > the meaning of "very very corner case". is it a unique case or a rare case > or > just a corner case? also should there be a comma after "only" so it should > be > "only, in which ..." otherwise I am not sure what the sentence means. > > > > _______________________________________________ > Gen-art mailing list > [email protected] > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art >
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