Paul, thank you for your review. I have entered a No Objection ballot for this document.
Lars > On Oct 25, 2022, at 17:54, Paul Kyzivat <[email protected]> wrote: > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed > by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just > like any other last call comments. > > For more information, please see the FAQ at > > <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. > > Document: draft-ietf-lamps-rfc3709bis-06 > Reviewer: Paul Kyzivat > Review Date: 2022-10-25 > IETF LC End Date: 2022-10-28 > IESG Telechat date: ? > > Summary: > > This draft is on the right track but has open issues, described in the review. > > Issues: > > Major: 0 > Minor: 1 > Nits: 2 > > 1) MINOR: In Section 4.1 (Extension Format): > > The following: > > "CAs SHOULD use the one-way hash function that is associated with the > certificate signature to compute the hash value, and CAs MAY include other > hash values." > > introduces the possibility that a client might not support *any* of the > provided hash algorithms. This seems bad. > > RFC3709 didn't have this problem because it required that an SHA-1 hash be > included and supported. > > This can be fixed by changing "CAs SHOULD" to "CAs MUST". > > 2) NIT: From IdNits: > > ** Downref: Normative reference to an Informational RFC: RFC 1952 > > I think it would be ok to change the reference to Informative. > > 3) NIT: Typos > > In Section 3 (Logotype Data): > > s/then each image objects/then each image object/ > > In Section 7 (Image Formats): > > s/The following table lists many commons/The following table lists many > common/ > > s/requirements these image formats/requirements for these image formats/ > > s/the client will receive response/the client will receive a response/ > > (The last one above appears twice.) > > In Section 10 (Privacy Considerations): > > s/cache logotype data is cached/cache logotype data/ > > _______________________________________________ > Gen-art mailing list > [email protected] > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
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