Reviewer: Stewart Bryant Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments.
For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-tcpm-hystartplusplus-13 Reviewer: Stewart Bryant Review Date: 2023-02-01 IETF LC End Date: 2023-01-25 IESG Telechat date: 2023-02-16 Summary: A well written document ready to do with just one small comment. Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: Remembering that this is the GENART review undertaken as a non-specialist, I am not sure how well known the clamp function is. I had to look it up, but once I did it was obvious. You might consider a few words to define it for the reader. _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
