Thank you.
Joel
On 2/15/2023 10:50 AM, Kenneth Vaughn wrote:
I have uploaded an update that more accurately indicates that a
"session" is a secure association between two /_instances of_ /the TLSTM.
Regards,
Ken Vaughn
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On Feb 9, 2023, at 6:56 PM, Joel Halpern via Datatracker
<[email protected]> wrote:
Reviewer: Joel Halpern
Review result: Ready
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Document: draft-ietf-opsawg-tlstm-update-11
Reviewer: Joel Halpern
Review Date: 2023-02-09
IETF LC End Date: 2023-02-20
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
Summary: This document is ready for publication as a Proposed
Standard RFC
Major issues: N/A
Minor issues:
In the fourth paragraph of section 1.1, the text refers to "a secure
association between two TLS Transport Models (TLSTMs)". As I
understand
the terminology, there is one TLSTM. There are two instances of /
realizations of the model. Should the sentence refer to instances or
realizations, rather than two models? (i-d nits gets confused by the
references to rfc 5953 in the revision description. After looking
at it, I
realized there was no problem here, rather it is accurate. A
comment on
this in item 14 of the shepherd writeup would have been helpful.)
Nits/editorial comments: N/A
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