Reviewer: Roni Even Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments.
For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://wiki.ietf.org/en/group/gen/GenArtFAQ>. Document: draft-ietf-uuidrev-rfc4122bis-?? Reviewer: Roni Even Review Date: 2023-08-02 IETF LC End Date: 2023-08-08 IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat Summary: The document is ready for publication as standard track RFC with nits Major issues: Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments: 1. In table 1 the allocation for Nil And Max UUID is specified but not in Table 2 (version 0 and 15) 2. In section 5 some of the sun section when the describing the ver field mention the value while some do not 3. In section 4 first paragraph “ the variant bits in conjunction with the version bits described in the next sections in determine finer structure.” the second “in” before “determine” is typo? _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
