Mallory, thank you for your review. I have entered a No Objection ballot for this document.
Lars > On Sep 11, 2023, at 23:15, Mallory Knodel via Datatracker <[email protected]> > wrote: > > Reviewer: Mallory Knodel > Review result: Ready > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed > by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just > like any other last call comments. > > For more information, please see the FAQ at > > <https://wiki.ietf.org/en/group/gen/GenArtFAQ>. > > Document: draft-ietf-mediaman-haptics-?? > Reviewer: Mallory Knodel > Review Date: 2023-09-11 > IETF LC End Date: 2023-09-11 > IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat > > Summary: The document aims to register a new media type for 'haptics' by > making > the case for why it is needed and doesn't currently fit under existing media > types, as well as provide the relevant information in order to register the > new > media type 'haptics' with IANA. > > Major issues: Technically, none. Suggest some harmony with the in-progress > [TOPLEVEL] reference (I-D to determine how registration be done for new media > types) to ensure this draft follows that guidance, which is presumably being > developed, in parallel, with community consensus. > > Minor issues: This should not stand in the way of progressing the draft and > would be subject to the judgement of the WG chairs, but perhaps much of the > Section 2 background could be moved to an annex as it may be out of date in > the > future. This would also allow the IANA registration details, which are > ultimately the most important matter of this text, to appear sooner in the > draft. The background details offer important context, but for the purposes of > registration may not be needed, ie according to [TOPLEVEL] guidance. > > Nits/editorial comments: The higher level focus of my review did not reveal > any > editorial nits. > > > _______________________________________________ > Gen-art mailing list > [email protected] > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
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