> On Oct 30, 2023, at 8:25 AM, Roni Even via Datatracker <[email protected]> 
> wrote:
> 
> Reviewer: Roni Even
> Review result: Ready
> 
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> Document: draft-ietf-nfsv4-scsi-layout-nvme-??
> Reviewer: Roni Even
> Review Date: 2023-10-30
> IETF LC End Date: 2023-11-01
> IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
> 
> Summary:
> The document is ready for publication as a standard track RFC
> 
> Major issues:
> 
> Minor issues:
> 
> Nits/editorial comments:
> THe security section has normative language “SHOULD NOT be deployed” in two
> paragraphs. Is there a reason for SHOULD NOT and not “MUST NOT”. I hope the
> security review will mention it since I am not a security expert

The reason for using "SHOULD NOT" is that "SHOULD NOT" is typically
how documents that have been produced by the nfsv4 WG have soft-
mandated proper security in situations where the security policy
depends on administrator choice.        

The Security Directorate seems copacetic with this language, thus
my opinion is to leave it as-is.


--
Chuck Lever


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