Hi Lars, Thank you for your comments. Please find responses below.
Kent > On Feb 1, 2024, at 6:38 AM, Lars Eggert <[email protected]> wrote: > > Paul, thank you for your review. I have entered a No Objection ballot for > this document. > > Lars > > >> On Jan 22, 2024, at 21:09, Paul Kyzivat <[email protected]> wrote: >> >> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area >> Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed >> by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just >> like any other last call comments. >> >> For more information, please see the FAQ at >> >> <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. >> >> Document: draft-ietf-netconf-trust-anchors-22 >> Reviewer: Paul Kyzivat >> Review Date: 2024-01-24 >> IETF LC End Date: 2024-01-24 >> IESG Telechat date: ? >> >> Summary: >> >> This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits that should be >> fixed before publication. >> >> Note: This review was cursory because this reviewer is ignorant of Yang, and >> so cannot say anything meaningful about the substance of the document. >> >> NITS: 2 >> >> 1) NIT: section 1: >> >> s/references truststore instances./references to truststore instances./ Better - thanks! >> 2) NIT: section 2.1.3.5 >> >> s/containing in inner list/containing an inner list/ Previously fixed already. Thanks again, Kent _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
