Hi Robert,

Thank you for reviewing the document.

On Sat, Nov 15, 2025 at 9:37 AM Robert Sparks via Datatracker
<[email protected]> wrote:
> Please seriously consider removing the appendix. The disclaimers about the
> diagram not being comprehensive will be ignored, and it will get implemented
> exactly as drawn.
>
> The second paragraph of page 12 is one very long sentence, and it parses 
> badly.
> Please break it into a few simple sentences.

Good points. We've made the suggested changes in -13.

-- 
Cheers, Jen Linkova

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