Done:

https://github.com/mdavids/rfc/commit/8aaf1d9d9bfc69684c402f8f640ec3ef35f4d129

Not yet published on Datatracker, while i await other feedback, but it is published here:

https://forsalereg.sidnlabs.nl/rfc/

https://forsalereg.sidnlabs.nl/rfc/draft-davids-forsalereg-19.txt

Thanks again!

--
Marco


-------- Original Message  --------
*Subject: *draft-davids-forsalereg-18 ietf last call Genart review
*From: *Russ Housley
*To: *"Marco Davids (SIDN)"
*Cc: *IETF Gen-ART , [email protected], [email protected]
*Date: *Thu, 4 Dec 2025 14:18:41 -0500

The proposed way forward sounds good to me.

Russ


On Dec 4, 2025, at 1:58 PM, Marco Davids (SIDN) <[email protected]> wrote:

Hi Russ,

Thanks for your quick reply and the useful feedback. All good points, I’ll fix 
them in the next draft.

About ACME: I meant the fictional Acme Corporation (used in RFC2377, RFC3183, 
RFC3224, RFC5229, RFC6020, etc). But you’re right, RFC8555 has made that name a 
bit confusing these days. Happy to change it if that’s better.

On the “minimal set”: that can be as little as one "mailto:"; URI. I figured 
that was obvious, but I’ll spell it out.

The rest is straightforward, I’ll take care of those too.

Thanks!

--
Marco

On Thu, 4 Dec 2025 07:19:33 -0800 Russ Housley via Datatracker wrote:

Document: draft-davids-forsalereg
Title: The "_for-sale" Underscored and Globally Scoped DNS Node Name
Reviewer: Russ Housley
Review result: Almost Ready
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Document: draft-davids-forsalereg-18
Reviewer: Russ Housley
Review Date: 2025-12-04
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IESG Telechat date: unknown
Summary: Almost Ready
Major Concerns:
Section 2.2 says:
    Content tags are optional.  Providing a minimum set to allow
    interested parties to engage is RECOMMENDED.
The specification does not define the "minimal set".  Without a
definition, the RECOMMENDED phrase is not actionable by an
implementer.
Minor Concerns:
Section 2.1 says:
    If no TXT records at a leaf node contain a valid version tag,
    processors MUST consider the node name invalid and MUST discard it.
Discard seems like the wrong action here.  I think that you want
processors to ignore such TXT records.
Sections 2.2.1 and 2.5 use "ACME" as an example.  I suspect this has nothing
to do with RFC 8555.  If that suspicion is correct, using a different
example string would probably be helpful.  If that suspicion is not
correct, please add a reference to RFC 8555 and provide a sentence or
two of explanation.
Nits:
Footer: s/_for-sale DNS/_for-sale DNS Node Name/
Section 1: s/mean it is unavailable/mean it is unavailable for purchase/
Section 1: s/domain name for availability/domain name for purchasability/
Section 2.6: s/can essentially be/can be/

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