Thanks Christer,

We updated the draft based on your feedback.
You can find the details below

Thanks.
Best regards,
-----Original Message-----
From: Christer Holmberg <[email protected]> 
Sent: Monday, December 8, 2025 4:12 AM
To: [email protected]; Hyunsik Yang <[email protected]>
Cc: [email protected]; [email protected]; 
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Subject: RE: [Gen-art] draft-ietf-avtcore-rtp-haptics-09 ietf last call Genart 
review

Hi,

Thanks for the reply! Please see inline (I have removed the comments where I am 
ok with your suggestion).

Summary: The draft is well written, and in general easy to read. However, I do 
have a number of questions and issues, mostly related to SDP, that I would like 
the authors to address.

GENERAL:
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Q_GEN_1:

The draft says that the new parameters are OPTIONAL, but if a parameter is not 
present Section 7.1 defines which default value SHOULD be used. So, while it 
may be optional to explicitly include the parameters in SDP, my understanding 
is that it is still mandatory to support them, and assume the default value if 
they are not present in SDP. Or? I think it would be useful to clarify that.

[HY] We added the following sentence in Section 6.2, and added text to SDP 
parameters with default values, to further clarify a default value should be 
inferred for those parameters. 
“Among the optional SDP parameters defined in this section, some parameters 
have a default value which SHOULD be inferred if the parameter is not present, 
unless an out-of-band agreement indicates a different value, as described in 
SDP consideration section.”

[Christer] That is still confusing, as you mix "optional" with default values. 
And, what about parameters that do NOT have a default value? Could you say 
something like:

"It is optional to include the SDP parameters in this section. Some parameters 
have a default value which SHOULD be inferred if the parameter is not present 
in the SDP, unless an out-of-band agreement indicates a different value, as 
described in SDP consideration section.”

[HY] Thank you for your suggestions. To clarify it, We have revised sentence 
based on your comments.
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Q_GEN_3:

The draft does not define SDP BUNDLE considerations.

[HY] While haptic streams may in some cases be bundled with audio and video 
streams, we think that SDP BUNDLE considerations would be out of the scope of 
this draft.

[Christer] I personally think people would want to use BUNDLE with this. But, 
if you have decided to not define the BUNDLE considerations I suggest that you 
explicitly specify it.

[HY] Thank you for providing more context about your comment on this. We agree 
that this RTP payload format can be used with BUNDLE (e.g., within WebRTC). 
However, we think we should rely on the generic BUNDLE mechanism, since we have 
nothing to add with regard to it. We also did not find BUNDLE-related 
statements in other payload format RFCs we consulted, which seems to confirm 
our understanding. To conclude on this, based on our current understanding we 
don’t think there is a need to mention BUNDLE, for those reasons (no specific 
consideration, and the general trend is not to have any). But we are opened to 
continue the discussion, since there may be other arguments that we did not 
take into account.
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Regards,

Christer
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