Hi Joel, Thanks for your review and comments
Responses are under discussion among the authors and will be shared shortly The authors' discussion is tracked on github: https://github.com/tsaad-dev/te/issues/330 Italo (on behalf of co-authors/contributors) > -----Original Message----- > From: Joel Halpern via Datatracker <[email protected]> > Sent: martedì 23 dicembre 2025 21:32 > To: [email protected] > Cc: [email protected]; [email protected]; > [email protected] > Subject: draft-ietf-teas-rfc8776-update-20 ietf last call Genart review > > Document: draft-ietf-teas-rfc8776-update > Title: Common YANG Data Types for Traffic Engineering > Reviewer: Joel Halpern > Review result: Ready with Nits > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review > Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for > the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call > comments. > > For more information, please see the FAQ at > > <https://wiki.ietf.org/en/group/gen/GenArtFAQ>. > > (My apologies for the lateness of this review.) > > Document: draft-ietf-teas-rfc8776-update-20 > Reviewer: Joel Halpern > Review Date: 2025-12-23 > IETF LC End Date: 2025-12-09 > IESG Telechat date: 2026-01-08 > > Summary: This document is basically ready for publication as a proposed > standards RFC. There is one wording issue that I believe should be > addressed. > > Major issues: N/A > > Minor issues: > I believe that this was mentioned in other reviews, and discussed, but I > am > still having trouble with it, Section 3.1 says "The "ietf-te-types" > module > (Section 4) contains common TE types that are independent and agnostic of > any specific technology or control-plane instance." Except that section > 3.1.1 then defines multiple MPLS specific identities. Which are clearly > technology specific. If you have a narrower meaning of "specific > technology" in mind, please use wording that conveys that meaning. > > Nits/editorial comments: N/A > _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list -- [email protected] To unsubscribe send an email to [email protected]
