Thank you, Linda, for the review. - revised "F-U" to "F1-U" - revised "to setup" -> "to set up" when it is used as a verb - maybe -> may be - added as note in Figure that VLAN is only illustrative
Two other changes were made (thanks to Luis for pointing that out to me): - revise I-D.ietf-teas-5g-ns-ip-mpls to RFC 9889 - revise I-D.jlu-dmm-udp-tunnel-acaas to I-D.ietf-dmm-udp-tunnel-acaas-extn Posted new revision. Here is a link to the diff: A diff from the previous version is available at: https://author-tools.ietf.org/iddiff?url2=draft-ietf-dmm-tn-aware-mobility-26 BR, John > -----Original Message----- > From: Linda Dunbar via Datatracker <[email protected]> > Sent: Tuesday, May 12, 2026 9:09 PM > To: [email protected] > Cc: [email protected]; [email protected]; last- > [email protected] > Subject: draft-ietf-dmm-tn-aware-mobility-25 ietf last call Genart review > > Document: draft-ietf-dmm-tn-aware-mobility > Title: Mobility-aware Transport Network Slicing for 5G > Reviewer: Linda Dunbar > Review result: Ready with Nits > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review > Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for > the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call > comments. > > For more information, please see the FAQ at > > <https://wik/ > i.ietf.org%2Fen%2Fgroup%2Fgen%2FGenArtFAQ&data=05%7C02%7Cjohn.ka > ippallimalil%40futurewei.com%7C610bd5dbad9b4039827d08deb094a7a8% > 7C0fee8ff2a3b240189c753a1d5591fedc%7C1%7C0%7C639142349703911 > 574%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJFbXB0eU1hcGkiOnRydWUsIlYiOiIw > LjAuMDAwMCIsIlAiOiJXaW4zMiIsIkFOIjoiTWFpbCIsIldUIjoyfQ%3D%3D%7C0 > %7C%7C%7C&sdata=RPVNdVmRzFWApy1QSgew4ZQxda8s%2F46QU3LixPZB > Nhs%3D&reserved=0>. > > Document: draft-ietf-dmm-tn-aware-mobility-25 > Reviewer: Linda Dunbar > Review Date: 2026-05-12 > IETF LC End Date: 2026-05-13 > IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat > > Summary: This document describes a way to map 5G user-plane traffic for a > given 3GPP slice to the appropriate transport-network slice by using the GTP- > U outer UDP source port, including across mobility and handover. > > Major issues: None > > Minor issues: None > > Nits/editorial comments: > - In the Introduction, "F-U" appears to be used where "F1-U" is probably > intended. - In Section 1, "UDP source port ranges in TN underlays for slice > mapping is described in Section 4" should be "are described in Section 4". - > There are a few places where "to setup" should be "to set up," for example in > Section 2 and Section 3.3. - In Section 3.2, "maybe realized in an NSS" should > be "may be realized in an NSS." - The text says the solution does not depend > on VLANs, but Figure 3 includes VLAN matching prominently. A short note in > the figure caption or text saying VLAN is only illustrative would improve > clarity. > > Best Regards, > > Linda Dunbar > _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list -- [email protected] To unsubscribe send an email to [email protected]
