Document: draft-ietf-rtgwg-multisegment-sdwan Title: Multi-segment SD-WAN via Cloud DCs Reviewer: Russ Housley Review result: Almost Ready
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://wiki.ietf.org/en/group/gen/GenArtFAQ>. Document: draft-ietf-rtgwg-multisegment-sdwan-13 Reviewer: Russ Housley Review Date: 2026-07-03 IETF LC End Date: 2026-07-08 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Almost Ready Major Concerns: None Minor Concerns: Section 3.1: This solution is for customers that have already chosen SD-WAN, and this offers GENEVE as well. Please avoid the comparison to other inter-connection services. Section 9.2: What hash function will be used with HMAC? Section 9.3: How are the keys set up? IKEv2? Nits: Throughout: s/public internet/public Internet/ Section 1: Please expand "Cloud DCs" on first use. IDnits offers a suggestion: -- The document has examples using IPv4 documentation addresses according to RFC6890, but does not use any IPv6 documentation addresses. Maybe there should be IPv6 examples, too? _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list -- [email protected] To unsubscribe send an email to [email protected]
