Document: draft-ietf-sidrops-aspa-verification Title: BGP AS_PATH Verification Based on Autonomous System Provider Authorization (ASPA) Objects Reviewer: Peter Yee Review result: Ready with Nits
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://wiki.ietf.org/en/group/gen/GenArtFAQ>. Document: draft-ietf-sidrops-aspa-profile-27 Reviewer: Peter Yee Review Date: 2026-07-19 IETF LC End Date: IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat Summary: This draft describes how ASPA objects are used to detect and mitigate certain route leaks and BGP AS_PATH trickery. The document is well written. Given my lack of deep routing knowledge, I can only say I believe it does what’s claimed. There are few minor nits that could be fixed. [Ready with Nits] Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: Page 3, section 1, 1st paragraph, last sentence: change “occur,” to “occur. Page 4, section 4, 2nd paragraph, 1st sentence: insert “the” before “Provider”. Page 5, 5th paragraph: change “certificate” to “certification”. Page 5, section 5, 2nd paragraph, 3rd sentence: expand “IX” on its first use here. Page 6, 1st paragraph after Figure 2, 6th sentence: delete “that”. Page 6, 1st paragraph after Figure 2, 7th sentence: delete “that”. Page 7, section 5.2, 2nd paragraph, 2nd sentence: change “equals” to “is equal”. Page 11, section 7.1, 1st paragraph, last sentence: append a comma after “e.g.”. _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list -- [email protected] To unsubscribe send an email to [email protected]
