Document: draft-ietf-sidrops-publication-server-bcp Title: Best Practices for Operating Resource Public Key Infrastructure (RPKI) Publication Services Reviewer: Behcet Sarikaya Review result: Ready with Issues
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://wiki.ietf.org/en/group/gen/GenArtFAQ>. Document: draft-ietf-sidrops-publication-server-bcp-10 Reviewer: Behcet Sarikaya Review Date: 2026-09-09 IETF LC End Date: 2026-09-11 IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a teletext Summary:The document is intended to be a BCP to describe operating Resource Public Key Infrastructure publication engine and its associated publicly accessible rsync and RPKI Repository Delta Protocol repositories. It has many issues, editorial which I mainly concentrated and technical as can be seen in other reviews. Major issues: Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments: Section 1 Par. 3 Publication services operations t a hanging t??? Par.4 These services typically include the Publication Enging (backend) and the public facing repositories for RRDP and rsync functions. Enging -> Engine Par. 5 seperation of functions -> separation of functions Par 6 In a addition some guidance is provided for CA operators in as far as CA operator choices relate to publication -> In addition ... There is a figure in Section 1 with no caption Section 2.3 RP Relying Party This document discusses the use of RP in routing however there is another very important area where RP is used, in identity protocols like OAUTH 2.0. The resources they protect in each case are completely different. This leads to a confusion in readers mind. I think the document should have one or two paragraphs to explain this unfortunate (?) name convention or if there are places where they interact. Section 4.1 2nd par. the acronym CDN is expanded here but already used in Section 1 twice. _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list -- [email protected] To unsubscribe send an email to [email protected]
