Document: draft-ietf-ivy-network-inventory-topology Title: A YANG Network Data Model for Inventory Topology Mapping Reviewer: Russ Housley Review result: Ready
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://wiki.ietf.org/en/group/gen/GenArtFAQ>. Document: draft-ietf-ivy-network-inventory-topology-11 Reviewer: Russ Housley Review Date: 2026-09-16 IETF LC End Date: 2026-09-26 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Ready Major Concerns: None Minor Concerns: Section 2: Please merge Section 2 and Section 2.1. Section 6 includes: Therefore, in typical deployments, "ne-ref", "port-ref", and "link- type" SHOULD be populated through automatic discovery but MAY only be overridden manually in exceptional cases (e.g., CPE, leased lines, or planned resources). The phrase "MAY only" seems to contradict the ususal definition of MAY. I suggest dropping "only" from the sentence. Nits: Section 7: s/no particularly sensitive RPC/no sensitive RPC/ _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list -- [email protected] To unsubscribe send an email to [email protected]
