Document: draft-ietf-calext-icalendar-jscalendar-extensions Title: iCalendar Format Extensions for JSCalendar Reviewer: Linda Dunbar Review result: Ready with Issues
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://wiki.ietf.org/en/group/gen/GenArtFAQ>. Document: draft-ietf-calext-icalendar-jscalendar-extensions-08 Reviewer: Linda Dunbar Review Date: 2026-10-14 IETF LC End Date: 2026-10-14 IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat Summary: This document defines extensions to iCalendar to support semantics introduced by JSCalendar. The document is well written, but have a few minor issues. Major issues: None. Minor issues: Section 4.1 specifies: Value Type: URI -- no default The ABNF defines: coordparam = *( (";" "VALUE" "=" "URI") / (";" other-param) ) The accompanying comment states that the VALUE=URI parameter is REQUIRED, but the * repetition permits zero occurrences. Consequently, the grammar permits a COORDINATES property without the VALUE parameter. Question: is VALUE=URI is mandatory? If yes, need to revise the ABNF to require exactly one occurrence, while still allowing other parameters. The same concern applies to SHOW-WITHOUT-TIME in Section 4.2. Section 5.1 defines OWNER as indicating that a calendar user can make changes affecting all participants. Section 6 correctly clarifies that the OWNER role does not itself grant authorization. Nevertheless, Section 5.1 could be misinterpreted as assigning editing privileges through the ROLE parameter. Nits/editorial comments: - 4.1 "In contrast to the the 'GEO' property": remove the duplicated "the" - 4.1 "The property value MUST a URI" -> "The property value MUST be a URI" Best Regards, Linda Dunbar _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list -- [email protected] To unsubscribe send an email to [email protected]
