Hi Sandra, On Thursday 24 Mar 2011 19:11:21 Sandra ordonez wrote: > Thanks to Slim Virgin for providing the foundation of our Manifesto. > > http://meta.wikimedia.org/wiki/Gender_Gap_Manifesto > > What language can we include so that we feel safe about sharing personal > stories here, or opinions? > Should people be required to "sign" the manifesto in order to stay in the > group? > What other goals do we want to include? >
Well, one note: «As this group touches upon complex problems that permeate human history» - I am a foreign spaker of English, and have been studying and communicating in English for many years now, and I wasn't familiar with the word "permeate" and could only guess it from its context: * http://en.wiktionary.org/wiki/permeate Perhaps it should be replaced with a synonym. Otherwise, looks fine. Regards, Shlomi Fish -- ----------------------------------------------------------------- Shlomi Fish http://www.shlomifish.org/ My Aphorisms - http://www.shlomifish.org/humour.html Modern Perl - the 3-D Movie. In theatres near you. Please reply to list if it's a mailing list post - http://shlom.in/reply . _______________________________________________ Gendergap mailing list [email protected] https://lists.wikimedia.org/mailman/listinfo/gendergap
