sebbASF commented on code in PR #24:
URL: https://github.com/apache/attic/pull/24#discussion_r2393792257


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process-howto.md:
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@@ -106,9 +108,9 @@ The project details will be found at 
[https://attic.apache.org/projects/${projec
 and associated retirement WIP templates at 
[https://attic.apache.org/templates/${project}.html](https://attic.apache.org/templates/)
 
 A sample ATTIC Jira template can be found on that page.
-Note that the project YAML file will need to be updated to add the ATTIC Jira 
issue number once it has been created.
+Note that the project YAML file will need to be updated to add the [ATTIC Jira 
issue](https://issues.apache.org/jira/projects/ATTIC/) number created in 
previous step.
 
-Once the page is live and Jira issue is created, follow steps and update issue 
state:
+Once the page is live and Jira issue is updated with tracking template, follow 
steps and update issue state:

Review Comment:
   with tracking => with the tracking



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process-howto.md:
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@@ -91,6 +91,8 @@ This automatically removes VP entry on 
[https://www.apache.org/foundation/leader
 ([src](https://github.com/apache/www-site/blob/main/content/index.ezmd#L304)): 
see [www-site](https://github.com/apache/www-site)
 and its rendered HTML in 
[asf-site](https://github.com/apache/www-site/tree/asf-site) branch.
 
+Create initial [ATTIC Jira 
issue](https://issues.apache.org/jira/projects/ATTIC/) to start tracking 
retirement process and add former PMC Chair for information about next steps 
where his help may be necessary.

Review Comment:
   his => their



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