On 2020/10/05 11:35:39, Justin Mclean <jus...@classsoftware.com> wrote: > Hi, > > Thanks for the feedback. > > > There's some spurious text at the start of the page. > > I’ll remove this. > > > Also, what does the acronym IP mean? > > IP = Intellectual property
It was a rhetorical question: the reader may not know what it means, so it should be referenced. > > - "Releases must be placed in the Apache mirror system." > > Which releases are being referred to here? Source and binaries, or just > > sources? > > The intention was source releases (but both can be placed there), I’ll update > it to say that. > > > - "Source releases and convenience binaries need to be made from IPMC > > and PPMC approved ASF releases." > > As it stands, the sentence appears to be recursive. > > It means you can’t make a release from a random point in version control. > Releases distributed on other platforms need to come from what was contained > in a voted releases. Can you suggest some better wording? Perhaps simplifying > to “Convenience binaries need to be made from IPMC approved ASF releases” is > better? Yes, that's better. I think "need to be" => "must be" > > - "Where possible it should be pointed out that Apache project make > > source releases and convenience binaries are just a convenience for > > end user." > > Does not read well. > > I agree how about "Apache projects make source releases but can if needed > provide convenience binaries to end users.”? "Apache projects are always released in source form, but additionally ..." > Thanks, > Justin > --------------------------------------------------------------------- > To unsubscribe, e-mail: general-unsubscr...@incubator.apache.org > For additional commands, e-mail: general-h...@incubator.apache.org > > --------------------------------------------------------------------- To unsubscribe, e-mail: general-unsubscr...@incubator.apache.org For additional commands, e-mail: general-h...@incubator.apache.org
