tobrien 2003/05/27 10:12:19
Modified: docs/site getinvolved.html
xdocs/site getinvolved.xml
Log:
Correct simple grammar errors in getinvolved.xml
Revision Changes Path
1.67 +4 -5 jakarta-site2/docs/site/getinvolved.html
Index: getinvolved.html
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RCS file: /home/cvs/jakarta-site2/docs/site/getinvolved.html,v
retrieving revision 1.66
retrieving revision 1.67
diff -u -r1.66 -r1.67
--- getinvolved.html 9 May 2003 12:36:48 -0000 1.66
+++ getinvolved.html 27 May 2003 17:12:19 -0000 1.67
@@ -175,9 +175,9 @@
<blockquote>
<p>
Every volunteer project obtains its strength from the people involved
-in it. We invite you to participate as much or as little as you
+in it. We invite you to participate as much or as little as you
choose. The roles and responsibilities that people can assume in the
-project are based merit. Everybody's input matters!
+project are based on merit. Everybody's input matters!
</p>
<p>
There are a variety of ways to participate. Regardless of how you
@@ -186,8 +186,7 @@
<p>
<strong>Use the Products and Give Us Feedback</strong><br />
Using the products, reporting bugs, making feature requests, et cetera, is by
-far the most important role. It's your feedback that allows the
-technology to evolve.
+far the most important role. Your feedback allows the technology to evolve.
</p>
<ul>
<li><a href="./mail.html">Join Mailing Lists</a></li>
@@ -228,7 +227,7 @@
<strong>Contribute To The Jakarta Newsletter</strong><br />
This is prepared
<a
href="http://nagoya.apache.org/wiki/apachewiki.cgi?JakartaNewsletterDrafts";>here</a>
-on the Apache Wiki. Anyone can contribute - especially for all you lurkers out
there!
+on the Apache Wiki. Anyone can contribute - especially all you lurkers out there!
</p>
<p>
<strong>Create a new subproject</strong><br />
1.12 +5 -6 jakarta-site2/xdocs/site/getinvolved.xml
Index: getinvolved.xml
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RCS file: /home/cvs/jakarta-site2/xdocs/site/getinvolved.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.11
retrieving revision 1.12
diff -u -r1.11 -r1.12
--- getinvolved.xml 9 May 2003 12:22:43 -0000 1.11
+++ getinvolved.xml 27 May 2003 17:12:19 -0000 1.12
@@ -11,9 +11,9 @@
<section name="How to Get Involved">
<p>
Every volunteer project obtains its strength from the people involved
-in it. We invite you to participate as much or as little as you
+in it. We invite you to participate as much or as little as you
choose. The roles and responsibilities that people can assume in the
-project are based merit. Everybody's input matters!
+project are based on merit. Everybody's input matters!
</p>
<p>
@@ -25,8 +25,7 @@
<p>
<strong>Use the Products and Give Us Feedback</strong><br/>
Using the products, reporting bugs, making feature requests, et cetera, is by
-far the most important role. It's your feedback that allows the
-technology to evolve.
+far the most important role. Your feedback allows the technology to evolve.
</p>
<ul>
@@ -74,7 +73,7 @@
<strong>Contribute To The Jakarta Newsletter</strong><br/>
This is prepared
<a
href='http://nagoya.apache.org/wiki/apachewiki.cgi?JakartaNewsletterDrafts'>here</a>
-on the Apache Wiki. Anyone can contribute - especially for all you lurkers out
there!
+on the Apache Wiki. Anyone can contribute - especially all you lurkers out there!
</p>
<p>
@@ -88,4 +87,4 @@
</section>
</body>
-</document>
\ No newline at end of file
+</document>
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