I think that the mockup looks good and if we can have it up for OSCON
we should.
My only issue was this sentence
As of 2007, OSAF has a staff of 25 contributors and is working
furiously towards the Preview Release.
I'd either stop after the number of contributors or I'd drop it all
together. It doesn't really fit in with the content of a mission
statement
Ted
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