Done.

On Sep 4, 2007, at 4:12 PM, Mimi Yin wrote:

Also, can we shorten the description of each section? I'm wondering if turning the sentences around so that they read as action-verb phrases will make them more distinct from each other... and more in- line with how the user might be approaching the page.

For example:

1. Which calendar applications can the Chandler Desktop subscribe to? --would be--> Subscribe with Chandler Desktop to:

2. Which calendar servers can the Chandler Desktop publish a calendar on? --would be--> Publish with Chandler Desktop to:

3. Which calendar applications can subscribe to a calendar on Chandler Hub / Chandler Server? --would be--> Subscribe to Chandler Hub / Chandler Server with:

4. Which calendar applications can publish a calendar on Chandler Hub / Chandler Server? --would be--> Publish to Chandler Hub / Chandler Server with:

5. Which mail protocols does Chandler Desktop support? --would be-- > Set up email on Chandler Desktop:



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