Hi Adrian, wow! Thank you very much for this thorough review. :-) I reviewed your patches and incorporated them almost unmodified. Also, thank you for the useful remarks (marked with XXX). I will revisit each of them at a later stage.
Because the number of your corrections is quite substantial, I generated a new version of the document with all the fixes in place: http://genode.org/files/53bcb8e33fe6602fed25edc3c7b922c5/manual-2015-03-09.pdf Of course, the new version is also available at my repository: https://github.com/nfeske/genode-manual/commits/master I am happy that you found the documentation valuable and greatly appreciate your contribution to it. Cheers Norman On 03/09/2015 11:08 AM, Adrian-Ken Rueegsegger wrote: > Hello Norman, > > First of all thank you for creating such a document and giving it to the > community. As I started familiarizing myself with Genode about a month > ago, your timing is impeccable :) > > On 03/06/2015 04:22 PM, Norman Feske wrote: >> I would greatly appreciate feedback from the community about those >> chapters - be it in the form of minor spelling or grammar fixes, >> suggestions for additional topics you wish to see covered, hints about >> misleading paragraphs, or any other concerns that you may have. > > I have reviewed the entire document expect for the NOVA deferred > page-fault handling section in the "Under the hood" chapter. Most > changes are typo fixes and other minor stylistic corrections. Besides > that I included some suggestions for alternative wording. > > You can find the changes incorporated into the document in the review > branch at [1]. Please let me know if you would like me to submit the > changes in a different form (e.g. pull request) or make other adjustments. > > Cheers, > Adrian > > [1] - https://github.com/codelabs-ch/genode-manual/tree/review -- Dr.-Ing. Norman Feske Genode Labs http://www.genode-labs.com · http://genode.org Genode Labs GmbH · Amtsgericht Dresden · HRB 28424 · Sitz Dresden Geschäftsführer: Dr.-Ing. Norman Feske, Christian Helmuth ------------------------------------------------------------------------------ Dive into the World of Parallel Programming The Go Parallel Website, sponsored by Intel and developed in partnership with Slashdot Media, is your hub for all things parallel software development, from weekly thought leadership blogs to news, videos, case studies, tutorials and more. Take a look and join the conversation now. http://goparallel.sourceforge.net/ _______________________________________________ genode-main mailing list genode-main@lists.sourceforge.net https://lists.sourceforge.net/lists/listinfo/genode-main
