On Mon, Jan 31, 2005 at 08:48:33PM +0200, Alexander Simonov wrote: > I am writing for GDP unicode guide in recruiting period. > It available on http://nk.ukrpack.net/~alexx/unicode-guide.html and XML on > http://nk.ukrpack.net/~alexx/unicode-guide.xml . > If any body have any another issues or troubles write me please.
Just some small remarks, only superficial things (didn't have time to
read it in depth):
- Take a look at the handbook to see how they do code listings.
The way you do it (no space before the command and a single color) it
looks more like a comment line than a prompt + a command.
#export ACCEPT_KEYWORDS="~x86"
- For some reason there are some à characters after several of the
section headers.
- One of the notes says: "ItÃââs nor necessary", which I guess
should be "It's not necessary".
- Some typos (that should prolly have been caught by a spell checker):
Chouse -> Choose
Know issues -> Known issues
Repalace -> Replace
programms -> programs/programmes (I think the former is
preferred^H^H^H^H^H^H^H^H^Hmore common)
Regards,
Maurice.
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Maurice van der Pot
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