090520 Petteri Räty wrote: >> A lot has changed from Baselayout version 1.x to 2.0.0, so all users >> should take a look at the upgrade guide found at >> http://www.gentoo.org/doc/en/openrc-migration.xml >> to not break their systems. You will likely see an update of >> sys-apps/baselayout in the near future: After installing, please >> follow the upgrade guide and do not reboot your system meanwhile. > Would this be better with > - to not break > - in order not to break
"in order not to break" is clearer & better English. >> After installing, please >> follow the upgrade guide and do not reboot your system meanwhile. > How does this sound: >> After installing, please don't reboot your system >> before following the guide because there's a risk >> of not being able to boot properly with the old configuration files. How about "after installing version 2.0.0 , DO NOT REBOOT YOUR SYSTEM until you have followed the instructions in the upgrade guide. Otherwise, there's a risk you won't be able to reboot properly, as some of the old configuration files will still be in effect". My CAD 0,02 ... -- ========================,,============================================ SUPPORT ___________//___, Philip Webb ELECTRIC /] [] [] [] [] []| Cities Centre, University of Toronto TRANSIT `-O----------O---' purslowatchassdotutorontodotca
