Matthias Maier posted on Fri, 11 Sep 2015 16:22:27 -0500 as excerpted:

> Title: libvirt-1.2.19 init script changes
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> OpenRC Users:

I'm not a libvirt (neither openrc, now) user, but it looks good here in 
terms of general clarity/spelling/grammar, and you didn't hit the 
commonly hit title-too-long bug. =:^)

The only very minor nit I can /possibly/ find is that message opening...

OpenRC users:

That's arguably slightly confusing as it makes the news appear to be 
about openrc, but then the rest of it talks about libvirt.

If you're a perfectionist, there's a possible argument for making that...

OpenRC libvirt users:

But arguably it's fine as-is.  I doubt I'd miss the libvirt just reading 
it, and only saw it here because I was /trying/ to be picky! =:^)

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