> On 20 Jul 2021, at 20:57, Ulrich Mueller <[email protected]> wrote:
> 
>>>>>> On Tue, 20 Jul 2021, Sam James wrote:
> 
>> -Revision: 1
>> +Revision: 2
> 
> Is this supposed to be read again by users? Then it should be a new news
> item (with updated date in filename) and the old item should be deleted.

Sure, I'll do that.
> 
>> +Please note that if you last changed your password before ~2008,
>> +it may using md5crypt or similar other weak mechanisms in /etc/shadow;
> 
> This should be "may be using" or "may use" I think.
> 
> s/similar other/similar/

Thanks!

> 
>> +a bug in PAM [0][1] may mean that you were unable to login. We recommend
>> +using `passwd` to change/refresh your passwrd so it is using modern
> 
> s/passwrd/password/
> 
> Also, this is read as plain text, so maybe use double quotes instead of
> accents graves.

Sure.

> 
>> +methods. A new version of PAM has been added to the tree to resolve this 
>> issue.

Cheers for the review,
sam

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