swift       05/06/02 17:01:24

  Modified:    xml/htdocs/proj/en/gdp/doc doc-policy.xml
  Log:
  Update on language, no content change, part of #94519

Revision  Changes    Path
1.16      +10 -10    xml/htdocs/proj/en/gdp/doc/doc-policy.xml

file : 
http://www.gentoo.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs.cgi/xml/htdocs/proj/en/gdp/doc/doc-policy.xml?rev=1.16&content-type=text/x-cvsweb-markup&cvsroot=gentoo
plain: 
http://www.gentoo.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs.cgi/xml/htdocs/proj/en/gdp/doc/doc-policy.xml?rev=1.16&content-type=text/plain&cvsroot=gentoo
diff : 
http://www.gentoo.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs.cgi/xml/htdocs/proj/en/gdp/doc/doc-policy.xml.diff?r1=1.15&r2=1.16&cvsroot=gentoo

Index: doc-policy.xml
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RCS file: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/proj/en/gdp/doc/doc-policy.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.15
retrieving revision 1.16
diff -u -r1.15 -r1.16
--- doc-policy.xml      2 Jun 2005 16:58:03 -0000       1.15
+++ doc-policy.xml      2 Jun 2005 17:01:24 -0000       1.16
@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 <?xml version='1.0' encoding="UTF-8"?>
-<!-- $Header: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/proj/en/gdp/doc/doc-policy.xml,v 
1.15 2005/06/02 16:58:03 swift Exp $ -->
+<!-- $Header: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/proj/en/gdp/doc/doc-policy.xml,v 
1.16 2005/06/02 17:01:24 swift Exp $ -->
 
 <!DOCTYPE guide SYSTEM "/dtd/guide.dtd">
 
@@ -22,7 +22,7 @@
 <abstract>
 This document contains the Gentoo Documentation Policy, which is the
 base document which all Gentoo Documentation developers and
-Contributers should know and exercise.
+Contributors should know and exercise.
 </abstract>
 
 <license/>
@@ -41,7 +41,7 @@
 professional documentation that is immediately clear and concise to the 
 end user. In order to fulfill this goal, we have very specific rules and 
 guidelines that <e>all</e> documentation must go through prior to
-dissemination on our website, or otherwise.
+dissemination on our website, or elsewhere.
 </p>
 
 </body>
@@ -113,7 +113,7 @@
 </table>
 
 <p>
-Every subproject has a Strategic Manager of its own and may have an 
+Every subproject has a Strategic Manager of its own, and may have an 
 Operational Manager if deemed appropriate. His responsibilities to the Gentoo
 Documentation Project (GDP) are listed in the <e>Manager responsibilities</e>
 section of the <uri
@@ -247,7 +247,7 @@
 Every bug reported on <uri link="http://bugs.gentoo.org";>bugs.gentoo.org</uri>
 should be handled as fast as possible. If a bug cannot be handled 
 in a timely fashion, the reporter of that bug should be informed about
-this using a comment on the bug and the bug should be registered in the 
+this using a comment on the bug, and the bug should be registered in the 
 <uri link="/proj/en/gdp/doc/metadoc-guide.xml">metadoc.xml</uri> file, if 
 applicable. The Strategic or Operational Manager may decide that a bug has a
 higher priority and should be addressed ahead any other task the assignee
@@ -365,7 +365,7 @@
     consensus-model on the Gentoo Documentation mailinglist
   </li>
   <li>
-    not performing at all for a long time without informing the GDP and without
+    not performing at all for a long time without informing the GDP, and 
without
     replying to the Operational Manager's request for a status update
   </li>
 </ul>
@@ -380,7 +380,7 @@
 </chapter>
 
 <chapter>
-<title>Documentation Team Recruitement</title>
+<title>Documentation Team Recruitment</title>
 <section>
 <title>Contributors, Authors, Translators</title>
 <body>
@@ -389,7 +389,7 @@
 Everyone interested in contributing documentation, editing existing
 documentation, writing new documentation or translating documentation is
 welcome to join the team. There are no rules or strings attached to
-this. Just make sure you are subscribed to <c>[email protected]</c>
+this. Just make sure you are subscribed to <c>[email protected]</c>, 
 and you have fully read this policy and understand it.
 </p>
 
@@ -461,7 +461,7 @@
 any existing documentation developer. The period is fixed - increasing the
 contributions does not decrease the period. Also, we don't average the
 contributions over time to make sure the contributor doesn't give a 
contribution
-burst and then waits until the Phase is over.
+burst, and then waits until the Phase is over.
 </p>
 
 <p>
@@ -478,7 +478,7 @@
 <p>
 If you feel that you have shown sufficient amount of contributions, contact 
 the Operational Manager of the Gentoo Documentation Project. He
-will ask you for your coordinates and other information and then arrange 
+will ask you for your coordinates and other information, and then arrange 
 for the next phase to be started.
 </p>
 



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