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Revision Changes Path 1.6 +9 -19 xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/hb-net-advanced.xml file : http://www.gentoo.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs.cgi/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/hb-net-advanced.xml?rev=1.6&content-type=text/x-cvsweb-markup&cvsroot=gentoo plain: http://www.gentoo.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs.cgi/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/hb-net-advanced.xml?rev=1.6&content-type=text/plain&cvsroot=gentoo diff : http://www.gentoo.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs.cgi/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/hb-net-advanced.xml.diff?r1=1.5&r2=1.6&cvsroot=gentoo Index: hb-net-advanced.xml =================================================================== RCS file: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/hb-net-advanced.xml,v retrieving revision 1.5 retrieving revision 1.6 diff -u -r1.5 -r1.6 --- hb-net-advanced.xml 14 Jun 2005 09:47:20 -0000 1.5 +++ hb-net-advanced.xml 14 Jun 2005 09:52:01 -0000 1.6 @@ -4,12 +4,12 @@ <!-- The content of this document is licensed under the CC-BY-SA license --> <!-- See http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/2.5 --> -<!-- $Header: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/hb-net-advanced.xml,v 1.5 2005/06/14 09:47:20 swift Exp $ --> +<!-- $Header: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/hb-net-advanced.xml,v 1.6 2005/06/14 09:52:01 swift Exp $ --> <sections> -<version>1.1</version> -<date>2005-06-09</date> +<version>1.2</version> +<date>2005-06-14</date> <section> <title>Advanced Configuration</title> @@ -67,7 +67,7 @@ You can chain these commands together. Here are some real world examples. </p> -<pre caption="config examples"> +<pre caption="Configuration examples"> <comment># Adding three IPv4 addresses</comment> config_eth0=( "192.168.0.2/24" @@ -115,7 +115,6 @@ </body> </section> - <section> <title>Network Dependencies</title> <body> @@ -182,8 +181,8 @@ <p> For a more detailed discussion about dependency, consult the section -<uri link="/doc/en/handbook/handbook-x86.xml?part=2&chap=4#doc_chap4"> - "Writing Init Scripts"</uri> in the Gentoo Handbook. +<uri link="/doc/en/handbook/handbook-x86.xml?part=2&chap=4#doc_chap4">Writing +Init Scripts</uri> in the Gentoo Handbook. </p> </body> @@ -220,21 +219,13 @@ <p> Another downside of bash is the content of variables - some characters need to be escaped. This can be achived by placing the \ character in front of the -character that needs to be escaped. Below is a list of characters that need -to be escaped in this way. -</p> - -<p> -<c>" ' \</c> +character that needs to be escaped. The following list of characters needs +to be escaped in this way: <c>"</c>, <c>'</c> and <c>\</c>. </p> <p> In this example we use wireless ESSID as they can contain the widest scope -of characters. We shall use the ESSID as it appears below. -</p> - -<p> -<c>My "\ NET</c> +of characters. We shall use the ESSID <c>My "\ NET</c>: </p> <pre caption="variable name example"> @@ -247,5 +238,4 @@ </body> </section> - </sections> -- [email protected] mailing list
