swift       05/06/28 11:15:59

  Modified:    xml/htdocs/doc/en/draft printing-howto.xml
  Log:
  Some language fixes

Revision  Changes    Path
1.4       +15 -15    xml/htdocs/doc/en/draft/printing-howto.xml

file : 
http://www.gentoo.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs.cgi/xml/htdocs/doc/en/draft/printing-howto.xml?rev=1.4&content-type=text/x-cvsweb-markup&cvsroot=gentoo
plain: 
http://www.gentoo.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs.cgi/xml/htdocs/doc/en/draft/printing-howto.xml?rev=1.4&content-type=text/plain&cvsroot=gentoo
diff : 
http://www.gentoo.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs.cgi/xml/htdocs/doc/en/draft/printing-howto.xml.diff?r1=1.3&r2=1.4&cvsroot=gentoo

Index: printing-howto.xml
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RCS file: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/draft/printing-howto.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.3
retrieving revision 1.4
diff -u -r1.3 -r1.4
--- printing-howto.xml  28 Jun 2005 11:08:05 -0000      1.3
+++ printing-howto.xml  28 Jun 2005 11:15:59 -0000      1.4
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 <?xml version='1.0' encoding="UTF-8"?>
 
-<!-- $Header: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/draft/printing-howto.xml,v 
1.3 2005/06/28 11:08:05 swift Exp $ -->
+<!-- $Header: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/draft/printing-howto.xml,v 
1.4 2005/06/28 11:15:59 swift Exp $ -->
 
 <!DOCTYPE guide SYSTEM "/dtd/guide.dtd">
 
@@ -13,7 +13,7 @@
 
 <abstract>
 This document covers the installation and maintenance of printers using CUPS 
and
-Samba. It covers both local installation as networked installations and you'll
+Samba. It covers local installation and networked installations and you'll
 also find instructions on using shared printers from other operating systems.
 </abstract>
 
@@ -335,13 +335,13 @@
     systems to use the printer attached to this Linux workstation.
   </li>
   <li>
-    In <uri link="#remote_admin">CUPS Remote Administration</uri> we allow
+    In <uri link="#remote_admin">CUPS Remote Administration</uri> we grant 
     access to the CUPS administration from remote systems
   </li>
   <li>
     In <uri link="#windows_pcl">Enable Support for Windows PCL Drivers</uri> 
you
     configure CUPS to support Windows PCL drivers. This is advised if you want
-    Windows systems to be able to access a Samba-shared printer as most Windows
+    Windows systems to be able to use a Samba-shared printer as most Windows
     drivers are PCL drivers.
   </li>
   <li>
@@ -358,16 +358,16 @@
 <body>
 
 <p>
-If you want other systems to access your printer through IPP you need to
-explicitly allow access to the printer in <path>/etc/cups/cupsd.conf</path>. If
+If you want other systems to use your printer through IPP you need to
+explicitly grant access to the printer in <path>/etc/cups/cupsd.conf</path>. If
 you want to share your printer using SAMBA, this change is not needed.
 </p>
 
 <p>
 Open up <path>/etc/cups/cupsd.conf</path> in your favorite editor and add in an
-<c>Allow</c> line for the system(s) that should have access to your printer. In
-the next example, we allow access to the printer from any system whose IP
-address starts with <c>192.168.0</c>.
+<c>Allow</c> line for the system(s) that should be able to reach to your 
+printer. In the next example, we grant access to the printer from any system 
+whose IP address starts with <c>192.168.0</c>.
 </p>
 
 <pre caption="Allowing remote access to the printer">
@@ -386,10 +386,10 @@
 <body>
 
 <p>
-If you are interested in remote administration, you need to allow access from
+If you are interested in remote administration, you need to grant access from
 other systems than just localhost to the CUPS administration. Edit
-<path>/etc/cups/cupsd.conf</path> and have it explicitly allow access from the
-systems you want. For instance, to allow access from the system with IP address
+<path>/etc/cups/cupsd.conf</path> and have it explicitly grant access to the
+systems you want. For instance, to grant access to the system with IP address
 of 192.168.0.3:
 </p>
 
@@ -576,7 +576,7 @@
 <tr>
   <ti>Internet Printing Protocol (ipp or http)</ti>
   <ti>
-    Use this to access your remote printer through the IPP protocol either
+    Use this to reach your remote printer through the IPP protocol either
     directly (ipp) or through http. 
   </ti>
 </tr>
@@ -814,7 +814,7 @@
 </p>
 
 <p>
-Make sure that your systems have <uri link="#remote_usage">access</uri> to your
+Make sure that your systems <uri link="#remote_usage">can reach</uri> your
 printer!
 </p>
 
@@ -850,7 +850,7 @@
 <p>
 Now navigate to the top of the <path>smb.conf</path> file until you are inside
 the <c>[global]</c> section. Then locate the <c>printcap name</c> and
-<c>printing</c> settings and set them both to <c>cups</c>:
+<c>printing</c> settings and set each of them to <c>cups</c>:
 </p>
 
 <pre caption="Changing the [globals] section">



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