swift 05/07/02 12:06:42 Modified: xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook hb-install-network.xml Log: Language updates, no content change; also part of #97225
Revision Changes Path 1.45 +12 -12 xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/hb-install-network.xml file : http://www.gentoo.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs.cgi/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/hb-install-network.xml?rev=1.45&content-type=text/x-cvsweb-markup&cvsroot=gentoo plain: http://www.gentoo.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs.cgi/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/hb-install-network.xml?rev=1.45&content-type=text/plain&cvsroot=gentoo diff : http://www.gentoo.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs.cgi/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/hb-install-network.xml.diff?r1=1.44&r2=1.45&cvsroot=gentoo Index: hb-install-network.xml =================================================================== RCS file: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/hb-install-network.xml,v retrieving revision 1.44 retrieving revision 1.45 diff -u -r1.44 -r1.45 --- hb-install-network.xml 2 Jul 2005 12:04:33 -0000 1.44 +++ hb-install-network.xml 2 Jul 2005 12:06:42 -0000 1.45 @@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ <!-- The content of this document is licensed under the CC-BY-SA license --> <!-- See http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/1.0 --> -<!-- $Header: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/hb-install-network.xml,v 1.44 2005/07/02 12:04:33 swift Exp $ --> +<!-- $Header: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/hb-install-network.xml,v 1.45 2005/07/02 12:06:42 swift Exp $ --> <sections> @@ -89,9 +89,9 @@ <p> You may want to try pinging your ISP's DNS server (found in -<path>/etc/resolv.conf</path>) and a Web site of choice, just to make sure +<path>/etc/resolv.conf</path>) and a Web site of your choice, just to make sure that your packets are reaching the net, DNS name resolution is working -correctly, etc.. +correctly, etc. </p> <pre caption="Further network testing"> @@ -99,9 +99,9 @@ </pre> <p> -Are you able to use your network? If so, you can skip the rest of this +If you are now able to use your network, you can skip the rest of this section and continue with <uri link="?part=1&chap=4">Preparing the -Disks</uri>. If not, bad luck, you'll have to work on it a bit more. +Disks</uri>. If not, read on. </p> </body> @@ -265,7 +265,7 @@ <p> If <c>net-setup</c> or <c>adsl-setup</c> failed, then it is possible that -your networkcard wasn't found immediately. This means you may have to load +your network card wasn't found immediately. This means you may have to load the appropriate kernel modules manually. </p> @@ -456,10 +456,10 @@ </note> <p> -If all above fails, you will have to configure your network manually. -Have no fear, it is far from difficult. But we are going to explain a -certain amount of networking to you as you will need it to be able to -configure your network to your satisfaction. When you're done reading this, you +If all of the above fails, you will have to configure your network manually. +This is not difficult at all. However, you need to be familiar with some +network terminology, as you will need it to be able to +configure your network to your satisfaction. After reading this, you will know what a <e>gateway</e> is, what a <e>netmask</e> serves for, how a <e>broadcast</e> address is formed and why you need <e>nameservers</e>. @@ -482,9 +482,9 @@ <p> Such an IP address is unique to a host as far as all accessible networks are -concerned (i.e. all hosts that you are able to reach must have unique IP -addresses). To be able to make a distinction between hosts inside a network, -and hosts outside a network, the IP address is divided in two parts: the +concerned (i.e. every host that you are able to reach must have a unique IP +address). In order to distinguish between hosts inside and outside a +network, the IP address is divided in two parts: the <e>network</e> part and the <e>host</e> part. </p> -- [email protected] mailing list
