swift       05/07/07 11:38:19

  Modified:    xml/htdocs/doc/en/draft bugzilla-howto.xml
  Log:
  Fix use of access

Revision  Changes    Path
1.4       +12 -11    xml/htdocs/doc/en/draft/bugzilla-howto.xml

file : 
http://www.gentoo.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs.cgi/xml/htdocs/doc/en/draft/bugzilla-howto.xml?rev=1.4&content-type=text/x-cvsweb-markup&cvsroot=gentoo
plain: 
http://www.gentoo.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs.cgi/xml/htdocs/doc/en/draft/bugzilla-howto.xml?rev=1.4&content-type=text/plain&cvsroot=gentoo
diff : 
http://www.gentoo.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs.cgi/xml/htdocs/doc/en/draft/bugzilla-howto.xml.diff?r1=1.3&r2=1.4&cvsroot=gentoo

Index: bugzilla-howto.xml
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RCS file: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/draft/bugzilla-howto.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.3
retrieving revision 1.4
diff -u -r1.3 -r1.4
--- bugzilla-howto.xml  7 Jul 2005 11:35:16 -0000       1.3
+++ bugzilla-howto.xml  7 Jul 2005 11:38:19 -0000       1.4
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 <?xml version="1.0" encoding="UTF-8"?>
 <!DOCTYPE guide SYSTEM "/dtd/guide.dtd">
-<!-- $Header: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/draft/bugzilla-howto.xml,v 
1.3 2005/07/07 11:35:16 swift Exp $ -->
+<!-- $Header: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/draft/bugzilla-howto.xml,v 
1.4 2005/07/07 11:38:19 swift Exp $ -->
 
 <guide link="/doc/en/bugzilla-howto.xml">
 <title>Gentoo Bug Reporting Guide</title>
@@ -327,14 +327,15 @@
 <body>
 
 <p>
-Programs often use files to get configuration information, access hardware, or
-write logs. Often a program attempts to access such files incorrectly. A
-program called <c>strace</c> was created to help deal with this. <c>strace</c>
-traces system calls (hence the name) which mainly include accessing memory and
-files. For our example, we're going to take a program foobar2. This is an
-updated version of foobar. However, during the changeover to foobar2, you 
notice
-all your configurations are missing!  In foobar version 1, you had it setup to
-say "foo", but now it's using the default "bar".
+Programs often use files to get configuration information, get access 
+to hardware, or write logs. Often a program attempts to reach such files 
+incorrectly. A program called <c>strace</c> was created to help deal with 
+this. <c>strace</c> traces system calls (hence the name) which include 
+calls that use the memory and files. For our example, we're going to take a 
+program foobar2. This is an updated version of foobar. However, during the 
+changeover to foobar2, you notice all your configurations are missing!  In 
+foobar version 1, you had it setup to say "foo", but now it's using the default
+"bar".
 </p>
 
 <pre caption="Foobar2 With an invalid configuration">
@@ -535,7 +536,7 @@
 
 <p>
 <uri link="http://www.bugzilla.org";>Bugzilla</uri> is what we at Gentoo use to
-handle bugs. Gentoo's Bugzilla is accessible by both HTTPS and HTTP. HTTPS is
+handle bugs. Gentoo's Bugzilla is reachable by both HTTPS and HTTP. HTTPS is
 available for those on insecure networks. For the sake of consistency, I will 
be
 using the HTTPS version in the examples to follow. Head over to <uri
 link="https://bugs.gentoo.org";>Gentoo Bugs</uri> to see how it looks.
@@ -917,7 +918,7 @@
 Then hit the Commit button for the changes to take place. The bug has been
 reassigned to me. Shortly afterward, you notice (by email usually) that I've
 responded to your bug. I've stated that I'd like to see an strace log to figure
-out how the program is trying to access your configuration file. You follow the
+out how the program is trying to reach your configuration file. You follow the
 previous instructions on using strace and obtain an strace log. Now you need to
 attach it to the bug. In order to do this, click on "Create A New Attachment".
 </p>



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