fox2mike    05/07/15 10:48:39

  Modified:    xml/htdocs/doc/en/articles making-the-distro-p2.xml
                        making-the-distro-p3.xml
  Log:
  Coding style fixes.

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diff : 
http://www.gentoo.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs.cgi/xml/htdocs/doc/en/articles/making-the-distro-p2.xml.diff?r1=1.1&r2=1.2&cvsroot=gentoo

Index: making-the-distro-p2.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: 
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retrieving revision 1.1
retrieving revision 1.2
diff -u -r1.1 -r1.2
--- making-the-distro-p2.xml    14 Jun 2005 09:26:47 -0000      1.1
+++ making-the-distro-p2.xml    15 Jul 2005 10:48:39 -0000      1.2
@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 <?xml version='1.0' encoding="UTF-8"?>
-<!-- $Header: 
/var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/articles/making-the-distro-p2.xml,v 1.1 
2005/06/14 09:26:47 fox2mike Exp $ -->
+<!-- $Header: 
/var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/articles/making-the-distro-p2.xml,v 1.2 
2005/07/15 10:48:39 fox2mike Exp $ -->
 <!DOCTYPE guide SYSTEM "/dtd/guide.dtd">
 
 <guide link="/doc/en/articles/making-the-distro-p2.xml">
@@ -25,8 +25,8 @@
 document is an updated version of the original article, and contains
 various improvements made by the Gentoo Linux Documentation team -->
 
-<version>1.0</version>
-<date>2005-06-14</date>
+<version>1.1</version>
+<date>2005-07-15</date>
 
 <chapter>
 <title>From Enoch to Gentoo, via minor setbacks and corporate run-ins</title>
@@ -330,53 +330,49 @@
 
 <ul>
        <li>
-       Start at the beginning of my story with "Making the distribution", <uri
-       link="/doc/en/articles/making-the-distro-p1.xml">Part 1</uri>, and 
-       finish up with <uri link="/doc/en/articles/making-the-distro-p3.xml">
-       Part 3</uri>. 
+               Start at the beginning of my story with "Making the 
distribution", <uri
+               link="/doc/en/articles/making-the-distro-p1.xml">Part 1</uri>, 
and finish up
+               with <uri link="/doc/en/articles/making-the-distro-p3.xml">Part 
3</uri>. 
        </li>
        <li>
-       Find out more about <uri link="/index.xml">Gentoo Linux</uri> from our
-       Web site.
+               Find out more about <uri link="/index.xml">Gentoo Linux</uri> 
from our Web
+               site.
        </li>
        <li>
-       Check out the competetion at 
-       <uri link="http://www.freebsd.org/";>FreeBSD</uri>.
+               Check out the competetion at <uri
+               link="http://www.freebsd.org/";>FreeBSD</uri>.
        </li>
        <li>
-       Read up on the 
-       <uri link="http://www.gnu.org/copyleft/gpl.html";>GPL</uri>.
+  Read up on the <uri link="http://www.gnu.org/copyleft/gpl.html";>GPL</uri>.
        </li>
        <li>
-       Take a look at the official 
-       <uri link="http://www.stampede.org/";>Stampede site</uri>.
+               Take a look at the official <uri 
link="http://www.stampede.org/";>Stampede
+               site</uri>.
        </li>
        <!--<li>
        Hang out on <uri
        link="http://irc.openprojects.net/";>irc.openprojects.net</uri>.
        </li>-->
        <li>
-       Find out more about the <uri link="http://www.xfree86.org/";>Free X86
-       Project</uri>.
+               Find out more about the <uri 
link="http://www.xfree86.org/";>Free X86
+               Project</uri>.
        </li>
        <li>
-       Get the 
-       <uri link="http://developer.gnome.org/doc/API/gtk/";>GTK+ Reference
-       Documentation</uri>.
+               Get the <uri 
link="http://developer.gnome.org/doc/API/gtk/";>GTK+ Reference
+               Documentation</uri>.
        </li>
        <li>
-       Check out the 
-       <uri link="http://www.xmms.org/";>XMultiMedia System</uri>, an
-       X11/gtk+-based MP3/CD player app.
+               Check out the <uri link="http://www.xmms.org/";>XMultiMedia 
System</uri>, an
+               X11/gtk+-based MP3/CD player app.
        </li>
        <li>
-       Get started on threads with a <uri
-       link="http://www.math.arizona.edu/swig/pthreads/threads.html";>POSIX 
-       Threads tutorial</uri> from the University of Arizona.
+               Get started on threads with a <uri
+               
link="http://www.math.arizona.edu/swig/pthreads/threads.html";>POSIX Threads
+               tutorial</uri> from the University of Arizona.
        </li>
        <li>
-       Get the latest on the <uri link="http://www.rpm.org/";>RPM Packaging
-       Tool</uri>.
+               Get the latest on the <uri link="http://www.rpm.org/";>RPM 
Packaging
+               Tool</uri>.
        </li>
        <li>
        Visit the good folks at <uri link="http://www.debian.org/";>Debian</uri>.



1.2       +24 -27    xml/htdocs/doc/en/articles/making-the-distro-p3.xml

file : 
http://www.gentoo.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs.cgi/xml/htdocs/doc/en/articles/making-the-distro-p3.xml?rev=1.2&content-type=text/x-cvsweb-markup&cvsroot=gentoo
plain: 
http://www.gentoo.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs.cgi/xml/htdocs/doc/en/articles/making-the-distro-p3.xml?rev=1.2&content-type=text/plain&cvsroot=gentoo
diff : 
http://www.gentoo.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs.cgi/xml/htdocs/doc/en/articles/making-the-distro-p3.xml.diff?r1=1.1&r2=1.2&cvsroot=gentoo

Index: making-the-distro-p3.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: 
/var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/articles/making-the-distro-p3.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.1
retrieving revision 1.2
diff -u -r1.1 -r1.2
--- making-the-distro-p3.xml    14 Jun 2005 09:26:47 -0000      1.1
+++ making-the-distro-p3.xml    15 Jul 2005 10:48:39 -0000      1.2
@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 <?xml version='1.0' encoding="UTF-8"?>
-<!-- $Header: 
/var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/articles/making-the-distro-p3.xml,v 1.1 
2005/06/14 09:26:47 fox2mike Exp $ -->
+<!-- $Header: 
/var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/articles/making-the-distro-p3.xml,v 1.2 
2005/07/15 10:48:39 fox2mike Exp $ -->
 <!DOCTYPE guide SYSTEM "/dtd/guide.dtd">
 
 <guide link="/doc/en/articles/making-the-distro-p3.xml">
@@ -27,8 +27,8 @@
 document is an updated version of the original article, and contains
 various improvements made by the Gentoo Linux Documentation team -->
 
-<version>1.0</version>
-<date>2005-06-14</date>
+<version>1.1</version>
+<date>2005-07-15</date>
 
 <chapter>
 <title>The author strays from Linux and then returns</title>
@@ -359,52 +359,49 @@
 
 <ul>
        <li>
-       Start at the beginning of my story with "Making the distribution", <uri
-       link="/doc/en/articles/making-the-distro-p1.xml"> Part 1</uri>, and <uri
-       link="/doc/en/articles/making-the-distro-p2.xml">Part 2</uri>. 
+               Start at the beginning of my story with "Making the 
distribution", <uri
+               link="/doc/en/articles/making-the-distro-p1.xml"> Part 1</uri>, 
and <uri
+               link="/doc/en/articles/making-the-distro-p2.xml">Part 2</uri>. 
        </li>
        <li>
-       Find out more about <uri link="/index.xml">Gentoo Linux</uri> from 
-       our Web site.
+               Find out more about <uri link="/index.xml">Gentoo Linux</uri> 
from our Web
+               site.
        </li>
        <li>
-       Check out the competetion at 
-       <uri link="http://www.freebsd.org/";>FreeBSD</uri>.
+               Check out the competetion at <uri
+               link="http://www.freebsd.org/";>FreeBSD</uri>.
        </li>
        <li>
-       Read up on the 
-       <uri link="http://www.gnu.org/copyleft/gpl.html";>GPL</uri>.
+       Read up on the <uri 
link="http://www.gnu.org/copyleft/gpl.html";>GPL</uri>.
        </li>
        <li>
-       Take a look at the official 
-       <uri link="http://www.stampede.org/";>Stampede site</uri>.
+               Take a look at the official <uri 
link="http://www.stampede.org/";>Stampede
+               site</uri>.
        </li>
        <!--<li>
        Hang out on <uri
        link="http://irc.openprojects.net/";>irc.openprojects.net</uri>.
        </li>-->
        <li>
-       Find out more about the <uri link="http://www.xfree86.org/";>Free X86
-       Project</uri>.
+               Find out more about the <uri 
link="http://www.xfree86.org/";>Free X86
+               Project</uri>.
        </li>
        <li>
-       Get the 
-       <uri link="http://developer.gnome.org/doc/API/gtk/";>GTK+ Reference
-       Documentation</uri>.
+               Get the <uri 
link="http://developer.gnome.org/doc/API/gtk/";>GTK+ Reference
+               Documentation</uri>.
        </li>
        <li>
-       Check out the 
-       <uri link="http://www.xmms.org/";>XMultiMedia System</uri>, an
-       X11/gtk+-based MP3/CD player app.
+               Check out the <uri link="http://www.xmms.org/";>XMultiMedia 
System</uri>, an
+               X11/gtk+-based MP3/CD player app.
        </li>
        <li>
-       Get started on threads with a <uri
-       link="http://www.math.arizona.edu/swig/pthreads/threads.html";>POSIX 
-       Threads tutorial</uri> from the University of Arizona.
+               Get started on threads with a <uri
+               
link="http://www.math.arizona.edu/swig/pthreads/threads.html";>POSIX Threads
+               tutorial</uri> from the University of Arizona.
        </li>
        <li>
-       Get the latest on the <uri link="http://www.rpm.org/";>RPM Packaging
-       Tool</uri>.
+               Get the latest on the <uri link="http://www.rpm.org/";>RPM 
Packaging
+               Tool</uri>.
        </li>
        <li>
        Visit the good folks at <uri link="http://www.debian.org/";>Debian</uri>.



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