fox2mike 05/09/08 10:32:09 Modified: xml/htdocs/doc/en migration-to-2.6.xml Log: #101398 - Grammatical and spelling fixes, thanks to vanquirius and rane for reporting.
Revision Changes Path 1.21 +10 -10 xml/htdocs/doc/en/migration-to-2.6.xml file : http://www.gentoo.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs.cgi/xml/htdocs/doc/en/migration-to-2.6.xml?rev=1.21&content-type=text/x-cvsweb-markup&cvsroot=gentoo plain: http://www.gentoo.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs.cgi/xml/htdocs/doc/en/migration-to-2.6.xml?rev=1.21&content-type=text/plain&cvsroot=gentoo diff : http://www.gentoo.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs.cgi/xml/htdocs/doc/en/migration-to-2.6.xml.diff?r1=1.20&r2=1.21&cvsroot=gentoo Index: migration-to-2.6.xml =================================================================== RCS file: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/migration-to-2.6.xml,v retrieving revision 1.20 retrieving revision 1.21 diff -u -r1.20 -r1.21 --- migration-to-2.6.xml 8 Sep 2005 10:10:28 -0000 1.20 +++ migration-to-2.6.xml 8 Sep 2005 10:32:09 -0000 1.21 @@ -1,7 +1,7 @@ <?xml version='1.0' encoding="UTF-8"?> <!DOCTYPE guide SYSTEM "/dtd/guide.dtd"> -<!-- $Header: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/migration-to-2.6.xml,v 1.20 2005/09/08 10:10:28 fox2mike Exp $ --> +<!-- $Header: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/migration-to-2.6.xml,v 1.21 2005/09/08 10:32:09 fox2mike Exp $ --> <guide link="/doc/en/migration-to-2.6.xml"> @@ -35,14 +35,14 @@ <title>Introduction</title> <section> -<title>Whats new in Linux 2.6?</title> +<title>What is new in Linux 2.6?</title> <body> <p> -That is no easy question to answer. Linux 2.6 is the result of over 2 years of -rapid development and stabilisation of new features, and is architectually -quite different from its 2.4 counterpart. Some of the more major changes are -listed below: +That is not an easy question to answer. Linux 2.6 is the result of over 2 years +of rapid development and stabilisation of new features, and is architecturally +quite different from its 2.4 counterpart. Some of the major changes are listed +below: </p> <ul> @@ -86,7 +86,7 @@ </p> <p> -If you're using a 2.4 profile, please change it to one that supports a 2.6 +If you are using a 2.4 profile, please change it to one that supports a 2.6 kernel by doing the following. </p> @@ -180,7 +180,7 @@ <p> If you are not a LVM user, but you think LVM2 sounds useful for you, you can convert your disks to this format at a later date, by following the <uri -link="/doc/en/lvm2.xml">Gentoo LVM2 Installation Guide</uri>. For now, lets +link="/doc/en/lvm2.xml">Gentoo LVM2 Installation Guide</uri>. For now, let us just concentrate on getting a smooth 2.6 migration underway. </p> @@ -535,7 +535,7 @@ <note> Recent 2.4 kernels will also allow you to use "usbfs" as well as "usbdevfs", so -you aren't breaking any backwards compatibility by doing this. +you are not breaking any backwards compatibility by doing this. </note> </body> @@ -766,7 +766,7 @@ <M> Sequencer support <M> OSS Mixer API [*] OSS Sequencer API -<comment> (and dont forget to select your soundcard from the submenus!)</comment> +<comment> (and do not forget to select your soundcard from the submenus!)</comment> <comment>(the following are required if you use LVM for disk management):</comment> Device Drivers ---> -- [email protected] mailing list
