fox2mike 05/09/09 07:26:39 Modified: xml/htdocs/doc/en kde-split-ebuilds.xml Log: #103492 - Minor grammatical fixes, thanks to Erik Musick for reporting.
Revision Changes Path 1.7 +5 -5 xml/htdocs/doc/en/kde-split-ebuilds.xml file : http://www.gentoo.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs.cgi/xml/htdocs/doc/en/kde-split-ebuilds.xml?rev=1.7&content-type=text/x-cvsweb-markup&cvsroot=gentoo plain: http://www.gentoo.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs.cgi/xml/htdocs/doc/en/kde-split-ebuilds.xml?rev=1.7&content-type=text/plain&cvsroot=gentoo diff : http://www.gentoo.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs.cgi/xml/htdocs/doc/en/kde-split-ebuilds.xml.diff?r1=1.6&r2=1.7&cvsroot=gentoo Index: kde-split-ebuilds.xml =================================================================== RCS file: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/kde-split-ebuilds.xml,v retrieving revision 1.6 retrieving revision 1.7 diff -u -r1.6 -r1.7 --- kde-split-ebuilds.xml 2 Jul 2005 12:31:47 -0000 1.6 +++ kde-split-ebuilds.xml 9 Sep 2005 07:26:39 -0000 1.7 @@ -1,6 +1,6 @@ <?xml version='1.0' encoding='UTF-8'?> -<!-- $Header: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/kde-split-ebuilds.xml,v 1.6 2005/07/02 12:31:47 swift Exp $ --> +<!-- $Header: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/kde-split-ebuilds.xml,v 1.7 2005/09/09 07:26:39 fox2mike Exp $ --> <!DOCTYPE guide SYSTEM "/dtd/guide.dtd"> @@ -19,7 +19,7 @@ </abstract> <!-- The content of this document is licensed under the CC-BY-SA license --> -<!-- See http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/2.0 --> +<!-- See http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/2.5 --> <license/> <version>1.5</version> @@ -271,7 +271,7 @@ <p> The previous section listed methods of improving the performance of the -split ebuilds specifically. Next we will briefly mention some future speedups +split ebuilds specifically. Next, we will briefly mention some future speedups which are equally applicable to the monolithic ebuilds. Such speedups help make the split ebuilds 'fast enough', apart from comparisons with less featureful solutions such as the monolithic ebuilds. @@ -388,7 +388,7 @@ <body> <p> -We intend to so eventually. However, there will be both monolithic and split +We intend to do so eventually. However, there will be both monolithic and split ebuilds for all the KDE 3.4 releases. </p> @@ -406,7 +406,7 @@ <p> Well, first of all, if you know the package you're looking for came with kdebase, you can still <c>emerge kdebase-meta</c>, with much the same results -as if you emerged the monolithic <c>kdebase</c>. So things haven't actually +as if you emerged the monolithic <c>kdebase</c>. So, things haven't actually become any worse due to the split ebuilds. </p> -- [email protected] mailing list
