neysx       05/09/25 16:19:38

  Modified:    xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook hb-install-sparc-disk.xml
  Log:
  Bug #107120 Fixed poor grammar

Revision  Changes    Path
1.23      +7 -7      xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/hb-install-sparc-disk.xml

file : 
http://www.gentoo.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs.cgi/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/hb-install-sparc-disk.xml?rev=1.23&content-type=text/x-cvsweb-markup&cvsroot=gentoo
plain: 
http://www.gentoo.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs.cgi/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/hb-install-sparc-disk.xml?rev=1.23&content-type=text/plain&cvsroot=gentoo
diff : 
http://www.gentoo.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs.cgi/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/hb-install-sparc-disk.xml.diff?r1=1.22&r2=1.23&cvsroot=gentoo

Index: hb-install-sparc-disk.xml
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RCS file: 
/var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/hb-install-sparc-disk.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.22
retrieving revision 1.23
diff -u -r1.22 -r1.23
--- hb-install-sparc-disk.xml   25 Aug 2005 19:22:50 -0000      1.22
+++ hb-install-sparc-disk.xml   25 Sep 2005 16:19:37 -0000      1.23
@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@
 <!-- The content of this document is licensed under the CC-BY-SA license -->
 <!-- See http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/2.5 -->
 
-<!-- $Header: 
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2005/08/25 19:22:50 neysx Exp $ -->
+<!-- $Header: 
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2005/09/25 16:19:37 neysx Exp $ -->
 
 <sections>
 
@@ -362,12 +362,12 @@
 <body>
 
 <p>
-We're ready to create the root partition. To do this, type <c>n</c> to create 
a 
-new partition, then type <c>1</c> to create the partition. When prompted for 
the
-first cylinder, hit enter. When prompted for the last cylinder, type 
<c>+512M</c>
-to create a partition <c>512MBytes</c> in size. Make sure that the entire root
-partition must be contained entirely within the first 2GBytes of the disk. 
-You can see output from these steps below:
+We're ready to create the root partition. To do this, type <c>n</c> to create a
+new partition, then type <c>1</c> to create the partition. When prompted for
+the first cylinder, hit enter. When prompted for the last cylinder, type
+<c>+512M</c> to create a partition <c>512MBytes</c> in size. Make sure that the
+entire root partition fits within the first 2GBytes of the disk. You can see
+output from these steps below:
 </p>
 
 <pre caption="Creating a root partition">



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