neysx 05/11/07 11:47:06 Modified: xml/htdocs/doc/en rsync.xml Log: #111691 English improvements
Revision Changes Path 1.41 +11 -11 xml/htdocs/doc/en/rsync.xml file : http://www.gentoo.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs.cgi/xml/htdocs/doc/en/rsync.xml?rev=1.41&content-type=text/x-cvsweb-markup&cvsroot=gentoo plain: http://www.gentoo.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs.cgi/xml/htdocs/doc/en/rsync.xml?rev=1.41&content-type=text/plain&cvsroot=gentoo diff : http://www.gentoo.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs.cgi/xml/htdocs/doc/en/rsync.xml.diff?r1=1.40&r2=1.41&cvsroot=gentoo Index: rsync.xml =================================================================== RCS file: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/rsync.xml,v retrieving revision 1.40 retrieving revision 1.41 diff -u -r1.40 -r1.41 --- rsync.xml 24 Apr 2005 09:21:50 -0000 1.40 +++ rsync.xml 7 Nov 2005 11:47:06 -0000 1.41 @@ -1,5 +1,5 @@ <?xml version='1.0' encoding="UTF-8"?> -<!-- $Header: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/rsync.xml,v 1.40 2005/04/24 09:21:50 swift Exp $ --> +<!-- $Header: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/rsync.xml,v 1.41 2005/11/07 11:47:06 neysx Exp $ --> <!DOCTYPE guide SYSTEM "/dtd/guide.dtd"> <guide link="/doc/en/rsync.xml"> @@ -54,7 +54,7 @@ them. Otherwise, we can provide these services and you can simply ship the machine to our colocation facility. Average bandwidth consumption for a main rotation mirror is currently ~7Mbps (around 2 TB per month). As the number of -main rotation mirrors increase, this number should decrease accordingly. +main rotation mirrors increases, this number should decrease accordingly. </p> <p> @@ -246,7 +246,7 @@ <p> A: Because our resources are limited, we need to ensure we allocate them in -such a way to provide the maximum amount of benefit to our users. As such, we +such a way as to provide the maximum amount of benefit to our users. As such, we limit connections to our master rsync and distfile mirrors to public mirrors only. Users are welcome to use our regular mirror system to establish a private rsync mirror, though they are asked to follow certain basic @@ -262,12 +262,12 @@ <p> A: Yes it is important. You do not need to perform the syncs at exactly :00 and :30 -but the syncs should take place between the following two windows: +but the syncs should take place in each of the following two windows: </p> <ol> - <li>:00 and :10</li> - <li>:30 and :40</li> + <li>:00 to :10</li> + <li>:30 to :40</li> </ol> <p> @@ -306,7 +306,7 @@ </body> </section> <section> -<title>Q: I'm seeing a lot of old and probably dead rsync processes, how can I get rid of that?</title> +<title>Q: I'm seeing a lot of old and probably dead rsync processes, how can I get rid of them?</title> <body> <p> @@ -439,7 +439,7 @@ </p> <p> -This command will help you killing old rsync processes that sometimes lies +This command will help you to kill old rsync processes that sometimes lie around due to connection problems. It's important to kill those because they count as valid connections for the 'max connections' option. You may run this command via crontab every hour, it will search and kill rsync processes older @@ -497,7 +497,7 @@ rsync mirror and set it up. You should choose a computer that can handle the CPU and disk load that an rsync operation require. Your local mirror also needs to be available whenever any of your other computers syncs its portage tree. -Besides, it should have a static IP address or a name that always resolve to +Besides, it should have a static IP address or a name that always resolves to your server. Configuring a DHCP and/or a DNS server is beyond the scope of this guide. </p> @@ -574,7 +574,7 @@ <note> Please note that most public mirror administrators consider syncing more than -once or twice a day as an abuse. +once or twice a day an abuse. </note> </body> @@ -597,7 +597,7 @@ </pre> <p> -You can check that your computer has been properly set up and sync against your +You can check that your computer has been properly set up by syncing against your own local mirror for the first time: </p> -- [email protected] mailing list
