rane        09/02/15 06:48:11

  Modified:             hb-install-alpha-disk.xml
  Log:
  fixes from #180550 by Ernestas Liubarskij

Revision  Changes    Path
1.30                 xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/hb-install-alpha-disk.xml

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http://sources.gentoo.org/viewcvs.py/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/hb-install-alpha-disk.xml?r1=1.29&r2=1.30

Index: hb-install-alpha-disk.xml
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RCS file: 
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retrieving revision 1.29
retrieving revision 1.30
diff -u -r1.29 -r1.30
--- hb-install-alpha-disk.xml   26 Jan 2009 08:04:26 -0000      1.29
+++ hb-install-alpha-disk.xml   15 Feb 2009 06:48:11 -0000      1.30
@@ -4,12 +4,12 @@
 <!-- The content of this document is licensed under the CC-BY-SA license -->
 <!-- See http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/2.5 -->
 
-<!-- $Header: 
/var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/hb-install-alpha-disk.xml,v 1.29 
2009/01/26 08:04:26 nightmorph Exp $ -->
+<!-- $Header: 
/var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/hb-install-alpha-disk.xml,v 1.30 
2009/02/15 06:48:11 rane Exp $ -->
 
 <sections>
 
-<version>9.0</version>
-<date>2008-04-01</date>
+<version>9.1</version>
+<date>2009-02-15</date>
 
 <section>
 <title>Introduction to Block Devices</title>
@@ -256,7 +256,7 @@
 <body>
 
 <p>
-On Alpha based systems you don't need a separate boot partition. However, the
+On Alpha based systems you don't need a separate boot slice. However, the
 first cylinder cannot be used as the <c>aboot</c> image will be placed there.
 </p>
 
@@ -299,7 +299,7 @@
 <p>
 We will now create the root slice, starting from the first cylinder 
<e>after</e>
 the swap slice. Use the <c>p</c> command to view where the swap slice ends. In
-our example, this is at 1003, making the root partition start at 1004.
+our example, this is at 1003, making the root slice start at 1004.
 </p>
 
 <p>
@@ -310,7 +310,7 @@
 </p>
 
 <p>
-When the partition is created, we change the type to <c>8</c>, for <e>ext2</e>.
+When the slice is created, we change the type to <c>8</c>, for <e>ext2</e>.
 </p>
 
 <pre caption="Creating the root slice">
@@ -501,8 +501,8 @@
 <body>
 
 <p>
-We will create a swap partition starting at the third cylinder, with a total
-size of 1 GB.  Use <c>n</c> to create a new partition.
+We will create a swap partition with a total size of 1 GB.  Use <c>n</c> to
+create a new partition.
 </p>
 
 <pre caption="Creating the swap partition">
@@ -705,7 +705,7 @@
 Now that your partitions are initialized and are housing a filesystem, it is
 time to mount those partitions. Use the <c>mount</c> command. Don't forget to
 create the necessary mount directories for every partition you created. As an
-example we mount the root and boot partition:
+example we mount the root partition:
 </p>
 
 <pre caption="Mounting partitions">




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