Hi Michael; you want to go ahead and make fixes as you go? We are learning what 
looks good here...

I may draw another picture. Christian I have saved the pictures in "svg" if you 
want to make an edit and regenerate the png (I recommend inkscape).

There should already be a reference to the AffineTransform javadocs; perhaps 
your links could go there?


-- 
Jody Garnett

On Friday, 6 May 2011 at 1:46 PM, Michael Bedward wrote: 
> Sorry: "Some readers with matrix notation" was meant to be "Some
> readers will be unfamiliar with matrix notation"
> 
> 
> On 6 May 2011 13:45, Michael Bedward <michael.bedw...@gmail.com> wrote:
> > Hello Christian, Jody,
> > 
> > Just looking at the new page. It's an excellent addition - thanks !
> > 
> > I wonder if when the matrix notation is first introduced there could
> > be a note (in one of those sphinx boxes) explaining that Mij means
> > element in row i, column j. Some readers with matrix notation or
> > confused that it is in y,x order
> > 
> > Perhaps add a couple of links at the end for people wanting to find
> > out more. The Wikipedia pages on matrix multiplication and affine
> > transformation are good for adventurous readers...
> > 
> > http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Matrix_multiplication
> > http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Affine_transformation
> > 
> > Are there any links to this page from the user guide ?
> > 
> > Thanks again,
> > 
> > Michael
> > 
> > On 6 May 2011 00:13, Jody Garnett <jody.garn...@gmail.com> wrote:
> > > Thanks; reviewing now.
> > > I see you put it in tutorials (this is for step by step exercises; screen
> > > snaps etc..); I was expecting something quick for referencing :-)
> > > Let me review ... whoa lots of writing :-)
> > > Feedback in no particular order (and I am applying similar fixes to the
> > > other tutorials as I have learned a lot since I wrote them):
> > > - I like the content
> > > - moving to advanced; as this is not part of the general introduction
> > > - shortening the title
> > > - removing the ..contents (as we now have the table of contents for the 
> > > page
> > > in the sidebar)
> > > - removing the welcome to foss4g blurb
> > > - changed your blurb a bit to describe how you rock out in the geotools
> > > codebase
> > > - changed some of your tables to show up as tables.. you had ended the
> > > previous line with "::" so they showed up as a code block
> > > (http://sphinx.pocoo.org/rest.html#tables)
> > > - replaced tabs with spaces
> > > - made a few more headings so people can find their way in the tutorial
> > > - made the instructions have numbered steps
> > > - very few improvements to english (perhaps more a reflection on my lack
> > > writing ability)
> > > - only recommendation is the need of a couple pictures (I tried to add 
> > > some
> > > text explaining what world and pixel co-ordinates were)
> > > I will commit again shortly.
> > > --
> > > Jody Garnett
> > > 
> > > On Thursday, 5 May 2011 at 10:45 PM, christian.muel...@nvoe.at wrote:
> > > 
> > > Hi Jody, there is a new tutorial about affine transforms. Please
> > > check out from geotools trunk and review.
> > > 
> > > Feel free to correct mistakes, alter the layout and improve my
> > > English. I will not make any changes until I hear something from you.
> > > 
> > > Cheers
> > > Christian
> > > 
> > > 
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