WWW-www.enlightenment.org pushed a commit to branch master.


commit c99e463a910b805ee6f884ecfe1cc91e55560199
Author: Philippe Jean Guillaumie <bat...@sfr.fr>
Date:   Tue Aug 4 04:22:10 2015 -0700

    Wiki page ubuntu-start changed with summary [] by Philippe Jean Guillaumie
 pages/distros/ubuntu-start.txt | 14 +++++++-------
 1 file changed, 7 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-)

diff --git a/pages/distros/ubuntu-start.txt b/pages/distros/ubuntu-start.txt
index 2f09fcc..5e86dec 100644
--- a/pages/distros/ubuntu-start.txt
+++ b/pages/distros/ubuntu-start.txt
@@ -1,8 +1,8 @@
 ~~Title: EFL on Ubuntu~~
 ==== Packages ====
-The available version of the official package is outdated, a better way is to
-install e19 from a PPA repository:
+The available packages in the official Ubuntu repositories are outdated.
+The following PPA provides the latest E19 packages:
 <code bash>
 sudo add-apt-repository ppa:niko2040/e19
@@ -13,13 +13,13 @@ To install Enlightenment and Terminology:
 <code bash>
 sudo apt-get update
 sudo apt-get install enlightenment
-sudo apt-get install terminology #optionnal
+sudo apt-get install terminology
 Then reboot or log out, select the Enlightenment desktop environment and
-follow the configuration menu.
+the configuration wizard will pop up.
-If you just want elementary with efl:
+If you just want Elementary and EFL:
 <code bash>
 sudo apt-get update
@@ -28,7 +28,7 @@ sudo apt-get install libelementary1
 ==== Compiling from source ====
-If you want to install enlightenment, elementary or EFL from sources, make
+If you want to install Enlightenment, Elementary and EFL from source, make
 sure the following dependencies are installed:
 <code bash>
@@ -53,7 +53,7 @@ libxext-dev libxkbfile-dev libxtst-dev libxcb1-dev 
libxcb-shape0-dev \
 libxcb-keysyms1-dev libbullet-dev vlc libvlc-dev autoconf libtool
-Then go to [[../docs-efl-start]], to install Enlightenment from source.
+Then go to [[../docs-efl-start]] to learn how to install the whole thing.
 //Alternatively, if you do not want to delve into the many subtleties of the 
compilation process — while retaining a fully functional Ubuntu system when 
build has finished — check out batden's bash script here://


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