On 26/04/16 20:18, Stefan Beller wrote: > On Tue, Apr 26, 2016 at 12:11 PM, Ramsay Jones > <ram...@ramsayjones.plus.com> wrote: >> >> >> On 26/04/16 19:10, Stefan Beller wrote: >>> The possible reasons for exiting are now ordered by the exit code value. >>> While at it, rewrite the `can not write to the config file` to >>> `the config file cannot be written` to be grammatically correct and a >>> proper sentence. >>> >>> Signed-off-by: Stefan Beller <sbel...@google.com> >>> --- >>> Documentation/git-config.txt | 6 +++--- >>> 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-) >>> >>> diff --git a/Documentation/git-config.txt b/Documentation/git-config.txt >>> index 6fc08e3..6843114 100644 >>> --- a/Documentation/git-config.txt >>> +++ b/Documentation/git-config.txt >>> @@ -58,10 +58,10 @@ that location (you can say '--local' but that is the >>> default). >>> This command will fail with non-zero status upon error. Some exit >>> codes are: >>> >>> -- The config file is invalid (ret=3), >> ^ >> I don't see why this is capitalised, so ... > > Because the whole listing is a bunch of sentences, > stringed together with commas at the end of each line. > Note that there is a ',' at the end of each line, except for > the last, where you see a '.'.
Heh, I hadn't noticed the commas, no - I assumed periods. > I thought about breaking that > up into a list and make all of the bullet points either a sentence > (all capitalised and ending in dot) or part sentences (lower > case for each bullet point, not clear about the ending) That's probably what I would have done. > I kept it as is in a long sentence as I expected to see > lowest resistance there. ;) 'One long sentence' split into a bullet/numbered list is err ... Hmm, I'm lost for words. ;-) >> Only a minor point. > > If the current state bothers you too much, > please send a patch with correct lists. :) > (Feel free to squash this patch into that or > just on top of this) Having said all that, (since I have very few documentation skills), I will leave this for others to improve, if necessary. ATB, Ramsay Jones -- To unsubscribe from this list: send the line "unsubscribe git" in the body of a message to majord...@vger.kernel.org More majordomo info at http://vger.kernel.org/majordomo-info.html
