nealrichardson commented on PR #33748: URL: https://github.com/apache/arrow/pull/33748#issuecomment-1387485745
Thanks for doing this. A couple of overall suggestions to reduce the monotony: * There's a lot of "now" in the bullets (e.g. "can now be" over and over). "now" is implied because these are release notes, so you can generally drop it or reword if there's some contrast you're trying to make. * Similarly, repetition of "Fix for a bug in which". I remember a recommendation somewhere about rephrasing bug fixes in a positive light, like "X correctly does Y" instead of "Fix a bug where X did Z instead of Y". -- This is an automated message from the Apache Git Service. To respond to the message, please log on to GitHub and use the URL above to go to the specific comment. To unsubscribe, e-mail: [email protected] For queries about this service, please contact Infrastructure at: [email protected]
