thisisnic commented on a change in pull request #10765:
URL: https://github.com/apache/arrow/pull/10765#discussion_r679145745



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File path: r/vignettes/dataset.Rmd
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@@ -118,12 +125,12 @@ have file paths like
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-By providing a character vector to `partitioning`, we're saying that the first
-path segment gives the value for `year` and the second segment is `month`.
+By providing a character vector to `partitioning`, you're saying that the first
+path segment gives the value for `year`, and the second segment is `month`.
 Every row in `2009/01/data.parquet` has a value of 2009 for `year`
-and 1 for `month`, even though those columns may not actually be present in 
the file.
+and 1 for `month`, even though those columns may not be present in the file.
 
-Indeed, when we look at the dataset, we see that in addition to the columns 
present
+Indeed, when you look at the dataset, you can see that in addition to the 
columns present
 in every file, there are also columns `year` and `month`.

Review comment:
       Done




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