damccorm commented on code in PR #24301:
URL: https://github.com/apache/beam/pull/24301#discussion_r1029328038


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@@ -53,17 +53,17 @@ ib.collect(beam_df.describe())
 ib.collect(beam_df.isnull())
 ```
 
-For a full end-to-end example on how to implement data exploration and data 
preprocessing with Beam and the DataFrame API for your AI/ML project, you can 
follow the [Beam Dataframe API tutorial for 
AI/ML](https://github.com/apache/beam/tree/master/examples/notebooks/beam-ml/dataframe_api_preprocessing.ipynb).
+For a full end-to-end example that implements data exploration and data 
preprocessing with Apache Beam and the DataFrame API for your AI/ML project, 
see the [Beam Dataframe API tutorial for 
AI/ML](https://github.com/apache/beam/tree/master/examples/notebooks/beam-ml/dataframe_api_preprocessing.ipynb).
 
 ## Data pipeline for ML
 A typical data preprocessing pipeline consists of the following steps:
-1. Reading and writing data: read/write the data from your filesystem, 
database or messaging queue. Beam has a rich set of [IO 
connectors](https://beam.apache.org/documentation/io/built-in/) for ingesting 
and writing data.
-2. Data cleaning: you typically want to filter and clean your data before 
using it for your ML model. Examples of this are to remove duplicate or 
irrelevant data, correct mistakes in your dataset, filter out unwanted outliers 
and handle missing data.
-3. Data transformations: your data needs to fit the expected input your model 
needs to train. Examples of this are normalization, one-hot encoding, scaling 
and vectorizing.
-4. Data enrichment: often you will want to enrich your data with external data 
sources to make your data more meaningful or more easy to interpret by an ML 
model. An example of this is to transform a city name or address into a 
coordinate.
-5. Data validation & metrics: you also want to make sure your data adheres to 
a specific set of requirements that can be validated in your pipeline. And you 
might want to report some metrics from your data such as the class 
distributions.
+1. Read and write data: Read and write the data from your file system, 
database, or messaging queue. Apache Beam has a rich set of [IO 
connectors](https://beam.apache.org/documentation/io/built-in/) for ingesting 
and writing data.
+2. Data cleaning: Filter and clean your data before using it in your ML model. 
You might remove duplicate or irrelevant data, correct mistakes in your 
dataset, filter out unwanted outliers, or handle missing data.
+3. Data transformations: Your data needs to fit the expected input your model 
needs to train. You might need to normalize, one-hot encode, scale, or 
vectorize your data.
+4. Data enrichment: You might want to enrich your data with external data 
sources to make your data more meaningful or easier for an ML model to 
interpret. For example, you might want to transform a city name or address into 
a coordinate.

Review Comment:
   ```suggestion
   4. Data enrichment: You might want to enrich your data with external data 
sources to make your data more meaningful or easier for an ML model to 
interpret. For example, you might want to transform a city name or address into 
a set of coordinates.
   ```
   
   (or other wording)



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@@ -98,33 +98,33 @@ The file structure for clustering_pipeline is:
     ├── main.py
     └── setup.py
 
-`pipeline/transformations.py` contains the code for different `beam.DoFn` that 
are used in the pipeline
+`pipeline/transformations.py` contains the code for the different `beam.DoFn` 
that are used in the pipeline.
 
-`pipeline/options.py` contains the pipeline options to configure the Dataflow 
pipeline
+`pipeline/options.py` contains the pipeline options to configure the Dataflow 
pipeline.
 
-`config.py` defines some variables like GCP PROJECT_ID, NUM_WORKERS that are 
used multiple times
+`config.py` defines variables that are used multiple times, like Google Cloud 
PROJECT_ID and NUM_WORKERS.
 
-`setup.py` defines the packages/requirements for the pipeline to run
+`setup.py` defines the packages and requirements for the pipeline to run.
 
-`main.py` contains the pipeline code and some additional function used for 
running the pipeline
+`main.py` contains the pipeline code and some additional function used for 
running the pipeline.

Review Comment:
   ```suggestion
   `main.py` contains the pipeline code and some additional functions used for 
running the pipeline.
   ```



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@@ -17,65 +17,76 @@ limitations under the License.
 
 # AI/ML pipelines
 
-Beam <3 Machine Learning. Being productive and successful as a machine 
learning practitioner is often dependent on your ability to efficiently 
leverage large volumes of data in a way that is uniquely tailored to your 
resources, requirements and budget. When starting your next AI/ML project or 
upscaling an existing one, a vital tool you should consider adding to your 
project is Beam.
+Beam <3 machine learning. Being productive and successful as a machine 
learning practitioner is often dependent on your ability to efficiently 
leverage large volumes of data in a way that is uniquely tailored to your 
resources, requirements, and budget. Whether starting your next AI/ML project 
or upscaling an existing project, consider adding Apache Beam to your project.
 
-Beam enables you to process large volumes of data, both for preprocessing and 
for inference. It allows you to experiment with your data during the 
exploration phase of your project, while providing a seamless transition to 
upscaling your data pipelines as part of your MLOps ecosystem in a production 
environment. It allows you to run your model in production on a varying data 
load, both in batch and streaming.
+* Apache Beam enables you to process large volumes of data, both for 
preprocessing and for inference.
+* It allows you to experiment with your data during the exploration phase of 
your project and provides a seamless transition when 
+  upscaling your data pipelines as part of your MLOps ecosystem in a 
production environment.
+* It enables you to run your model in production on a varying data load, both 
in batch and streaming.
 
 ## AI/ML workloads
 
-Let’s take a look at the different building blocks that we need to build an 
end-to-end AI/ML use case, and where Beam will come in handy in building those 
blocks.
+Let’s take a look at the different building blocks that we need to create an 
end-to-end AI/ML use case and where Apache Beam can help.
 
-![Overview of  AI/ML building blocks & where Beam can be 
used](/images/ml-workflows.svg)
+![Overview of AI/ML building blocks and where Apache Beam can be 
used](/images/ml-workflows.svg)
 
-1. Data ingestion: incoming new data will be stored in your filesystem, 
database or published on a messaging queue.
-2. **Data validation**: once you have received your data you need to check the 
quality of your data such as detecting outliers and reporting on standard 
deviations and class distributions.
-3. **Data preprocessing**: after validating your data, you need to transform 
it so that it is ready to be used for training your model.
-4. Model training: once your data is ready, you can start training your AI/ML 
model. This step will typically be repeated multiple times depending on the 
quality of your trained model.
-5. Model validation: before deploying your new model you need to validate its 
performance and accuracy.
-6. **Model deployment**: finally you can deploy your model, meaning it can run 
inference on any new or existing data.
+1. Data ingestion: Incoming new data is stored in your file system or 
database, or it's published to a messaging queue.
+2. **Data validation**: After you receieve your data, check the quality of 
your data. For example, you might want to detect outliers and calculate 
standard deviations and class distributions.
+3. **Data preprocessing**: After you validate your data, transform the data so 
that it is ready to use to train your model.
+4. Model training: When your data is ready, you can start training your AI/ML 
model. This step is typically repeated multiple times, depending on the quality 
of your trained model.
+5. Model validation: Before you deploy your new model, validate its 
performance and accuracy.
+6. **Model deployment**: Deploy your model, using it to run inference on new 
or existing data.
 
-All of these steps can be executed multiple times, as your data might grow and 
evolve over time and you want your model to stay up to date and guarantee its 
best performance. This is why it is very important to apply MLOps to your 
project, meaning that you aim to automate the AI/ML workflows throughout the 
model and data lifecycle. This can be achieved by using orchestrators that 
automate this flow and handle the transition between the different building 
blocks in your project.
+To keep your model up to date and performing well as your data grows and 
evolves, run these steps multiple times. In addition, you can apply MLOps to 
your project to automate the AI/ML workflows throughout the model and data 
lifecycle. Use orchestrators to automate this flow and to handle the transition 
between the different building blocks in your project.
 
-Beam can be used for data validation, data preprocessing and model 
deployment/inference. We will now take a look at these different building 
blocks in more detail and at how they can be orchestrated. Finally, you can 
also find full examples of AI/ML pipelines in Beam.
+You can use Apache Beam for data validation, data preprocessing, and model 
deployment/inference. The next section examines these building blocks in more 
detail and explores how they can be orchestrated.
 
 ## Data processing
 
-Data validation and preprocessing can be done in Beam by setting up data 
pipelines that transform your data and output metrics computed from your data. 
Beam has a rich set of [IO 
connectors](https://beam.apache.org/documentation/io/built-in/) for ingesting 
and writing data, which means you can easily integrate it with your existing 
filesystem, database or messaging queue. When developing your ML model, you can 
also first explore your data with the [Beam DataFrame 
API](https://beam.apache.org/documentation/dsls/dataframes/overview/) so that 
you can identify and implement the required preprocessing steps allowing you to 
iterate faster towards production. Another common pattern is that the steps 
executed during preprocessing need to also be applied before running inference, 
in which case you can use the same Beam implementation twice. Lastly, if you 
need to do post-processing after running inference, this can also be done as 
part of your model inference pipeline.
+You can use Apache Beam for data validation and preprocessing by setting up 
data pipelines that transform your data and output metrics computed from your 
data. Beam has a rich set of [I/O 
connectors](https://beam.apache.org/documentation/io/built-in/) for ingesting 
and writing data, which allows you to integrate it with your existing file 
system, database, or messaging queue.
+
+When developing your ML model, you can also first explore your data with the 
[Beam DataFrame 
API](https://beam.apache.org/documentation/dsls/dataframes/overview/). The 
DataFrom API lets you identify and implement the required preprocessing steps, 
making it easier for you to move your pipeline to production.
+
+Steps executed during preprocessing often also need to be applied before 
running inference, in which case you can use the same Beam implementation 
twice. Lastly, when you need to do postprocessing after running inference, 
Apache Beam allows you to incoporate the postprocessing into your model 
inference pipeline.
 
 Further reading:
 * [AI/ML pipelines in Beam: data processing](/documentation/ml/data-processing)
 
 ## Inference
 
-Beam provides different ways of implementing inference as part of your 
pipeline. This way you can run your ML model directly in your pipeline and 
apply it on big scale datasets, both in batch and streaming pipelines.
+Beam provides different ways to implement inference as part of your pipeline. 
You can run your ML model directly in your pipeline and apply it on big scale 
datasets, both in batch and streaming pipelines.
 
 ### RunInference
+
 The recommended way to implement inference is by using the [RunInference 
API](https://beam.apache.org/documentation/sdks/python-machine-learning/). 
RunInference takes advantage of existing Apache Beam concepts, such as the 
`BatchElements` transform and the `Shared` class, to enable you to use models 
in your pipelines to create transforms optimized for machine learning 
inferences. The ability to create arbitrarily complex workflow graphs also 
allows you to build multi-model pipelines.
 
-You can easily integrate your model in your pipeline by using the 
corresponding model handlers. A `ModelHandler` is an object that wraps the 
underlying model and allows you to configure its parameters. Model handlers are 
available for PyTorch, Scikit-learn and TensorFlow. Examples of how to use 
RunInference for PyTorch, Scikit-learn and TensorFlow are shown in this 
[notebook](https://github.com/apache/beam/blob/master/examples/notebooks/beam-ml/run_inference_pytorch_tensorflow_sklearn.ipynb).
+You can integrate your model in your pipeline by using the corresponding model 
handlers. A `ModelHandler` is an object that wraps the underlying model and 
allows you to configure its parameters. Model handlers are available for 
PyTorch, scikit-learn, and TensorFlow. Examples of how to use RunInference for 
PyTorch, scikit-learn, and TensorFlow are shown in this 
[notebook](https://github.com/apache/beam/blob/master/examples/notebooks/beam-ml/run_inference_pytorch_tensorflow_sklearn.ipynb).
 
-GPUs are optimized for training artificial intelligence and deep learning 
models as they can process multiple computations simultaneously. RunInference 
also allows you to use GPUs for significant inference speedup. An example of 
how to use RunInference with GPUs is demonstrated 
[here](/documentation/ml/runinference-metrics).
+Because they can process multiple computations simultaneously, GPUs are 
optimized for training artificial intelligence and deep learning models. 
RunInference also allows you to use GPUs for significant inference speedup. An 
example of how to use RunInference with GPUs is demonstrated on the 
[RunInference metrics](/documentation/ml/runinference-metrics) page.
 
 ### Custom Inference
-As of now, RunInference API doesn't support making remote inference calls 
(e.g. Natural Language API, Cloud Vision API and others). Therefore, in order 
to use these remote APIs with Beam, one needs to write custom inference call. 
The 
[notebook](https://github.com/apache/beam/blob/master/examples/notebooks/beam-ml/custom_remote_inference.ipynb)
 shows how you can implement such a custom remote inference call using 
`beam.DoFn`. While implementing such a remote inference for real life projects, 
you need to think about following:
 
-* API quotas and the heavy load you might incur on your external API. For 
optimizing the calls to external API, you can confgure `PipelineOptions` to 
limit the parallel calls to the external remote API.
+The RunInference API doesn't currently support making remote inference calls 
using, for example, the Natural Language API or the Cloud Vision API. 
Therefore, in order to use these remote APIs with Apache Beam, you need to 
write custom inference calls. The [Remote inference in Apache Beam 
notebook](https://github.com/apache/beam/blob/master/examples/notebooks/beam-ml/custom_remote_inference.ipynb)
 shows how to implement a custom remote inference call using `beam.DoFn`. When 
you implement a remote inference for real life projects, consider the following 
factors:
 
-* You must be prepared to encounter, identify, and handle failure as 
gracefully as possible. We recommend using techniques like `Exponential 
backoff` and `Dead letter queues`.
+* API quotas and the heavy load you might incur on your external API. To 
optimize the calls to an external API, you can confgure `PipelineOptions` to 
limit the parallel calls to the external remote API.
 
-* When running inference with an external API, you should batch your input 
together to allow for more efficient execution.
+* Be prepared to encounter, identify, and handle failure as gracefully as 
possible. Use techniques like `Exponential backoff` and `Dead letter queues`.

Review Comment:
   Should exponential backoff and dead letter queues be capitalized here?



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@@ -55,35 +55,35 @@ The file structure for ingestion pipeline is:
     ├── main.py
     └── setup.py
 
-`pipeline/utils.py` contains the code for loading the emotion dataset and two 
`beam.DoFn` that are used for data transformation
+`pipeline/utils.py` contains the code for loading the emotion dataset and two 
`beam.DoFn` that are used for data transformation.
 
-`pipeline/options.py` contains the pipeline options to configure the Dataflow 
pipeline
+`pipeline/options.py` contains the pipeline options to configure the Dataflow 
pipeline.
 
-`config.py` defines some variables like GCP PROJECT_ID, NUM_WORKERS that are 
used multiple times
+`config.py` defines some variables that are used multiple times, like GCP 
PROJECT_ID and NUM_WORKERS.
 
-`setup.py` defines the packages/requirements for the pipeline to run
+`setup.py` defines the packages and requirements for the pipeline to run.
 
-`main.py` contains the pipeline code and some additional function used for 
running the pipeline
+`main.py` contains the pipeline code and some additional function used for 
running the pipeline.
 
-### How to Run the Pipeline ?
-First, make sure you have installed the required packages.
+## Run the Pipeline
+First, install the required packages.
 
 1. Locally on your machine: `python main.py`
 2. On GCP for Dataflow: `python main.py --mode cloud`
 
 
 The `write_data_to_pubsub_pipeline` contains four different transforms:
-1. Load emotion dataset using HuggingFace Datasets (We take samples from 3 
classes instead of 6 for simplicity)
-2. Associate each text with a unique identifier (UID)
-3. Convert the text into a format PubSub is expecting
-4. Write the formatted message to PubSub
+1. Load the emotion dataset using Hugging Face datasets (for simplicity, we 
take samples from three classes instead of six).
+2. Associate each piece of text with a unique identifier (UID).
+3. Convert the text into the format that Pub/Sub expects.
+4. Write the formatted message to Pub/Sub.
 
 
 ## Clustering on Streaming Data
 
-After having the data ingested to PubSub, we can now look into the second 
pipeline, where we read the streaming message from PubSub, convert the text to 
a embedding using a language model and cluster them using BIRCH.
+After ingeting the data to Pub/Sub, examine the second pipeline, where we read 
the streaming message from Pub/Sub, convert the text to a embedding using a 
language model, and cluster the embedding using BIRCH.

Review Comment:
   ```suggestion
   After ingesting the data to Pub/Sub, examine the second pipeline, where we 
read the streaming message from Pub/Sub, convert the text to a embedding using 
a language model, and cluster the embedding using BIRCH.
   ```



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