damondouglas commented on a change in pull request #16549:
URL: https://github.com/apache/beam/pull/16549#discussion_r792041617



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File path: playground/terraform/modules/memorystore/main.tf
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+#
+# Licensed to the Apache Software Foundation (ASF) under one
+# or more contributor license agreements.  See the NOTICE file
+# distributed with this work for additional information
+# regarding copyright ownership.  The ASF licenses this file
+# to you under the Apache License, Version 2.0 (the
+# "License"); you may not use this file except in compliance
+# with the License.  You may obtain a copy of the License at
+#
+#   http://www.apache.org/licenses/LICENSE-2.0
+#
+# Unless required by applicable law or agreed to in writing,
+# software distributed under the License is distributed on an
+# "AS IS" BASIS, WITHOUT WARRANTIES OR CONDITIONS OF ANY
+# KIND, either express or implied.  See the License for the
+# specific language governing permissions and limitations
+# under the License.
+#
+
+
+data "terraform_remote_state" "remote_state_vpc" {
+  backend = "gcs"
+  config = {
+    bucket  = "${var.beam_playground_terraform}"
+  }
+}
+
+
+resource "google_redis_instance" "cache" {
+  provider           = google-beta

Review comment:
       Why is the provider `google-beta`?

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File path: playground/terraform/modules/account.tf
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+#
+# Licensed to the Apache Software Foundation (ASF) under one
+# or more contributor license agreements.  See the NOTICE file
+# distributed with this work for additional information
+# regarding copyright ownership.  The ASF licenses this file
+# to you under the Apache License, Version 2.0 (the
+# "License"); you may not use this file except in compliance
+# with the License.  You may obtain a copy of the License at
+#
+#   http://www.apache.org/licenses/LICENSE-2.0
+#
+# Unless required by applicable law or agreed to in writing,
+# software distributed under the License is distributed on an
+# "AS IS" BASIS, WITHOUT WARRANTIES OR CONDITIONS OF ANY
+# KIND, either express or implied.  See the License for the
+# specific language governing permissions and limitations
+# under the License.
+#
+
+# need enable api
+#  
https://console.developers.google.com/apis/api/iam.googleapis.com/overview?project=750903720791
+resource "google_service_account" "account" {
+  project            = "${var.project_id}"
+  account_id   = "${var.service_account}"
+  display_name = "${var.service_account}"
+}
+
+
+output "playground_service_account_id" {
+  value = "${google_service_account.account.account_id}"
+}
+
+
+resource "google_project_iam_binding" "account_iam_binding" {
+  for_each = toset([
+  "roles/dataflow.admin",

Review comment:
       Is `roles/dataflow.admin` the minimal necessary to achieve the job 
function of the service account?

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File path: .github/workflows/build_playground_backend.yml
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@@ -69,7 +69,7 @@ jobs:
         if: startsWith(github.ref, 'ref/tags/')
       - name: Preapre Build Python
         run: ./gradlew playground:backend:containers:python:dockerPush 
-Pdocker-repository-root='${{ secrets.REGISTRY_NAME}}/${{ secrets.PROJECT_ID 
}}/playground-repository' -Pbase-image='apache/beam_java8_sdk:${{ 
env.BEAM_VERSION }}'
-     - name: Preapre Build Go
+      - name: Preapre Build Go

Review comment:
       Can we correct the spelling here to `Prepare`?

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File path: playground/terraform/modules/account.tf
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+#
+# Licensed to the Apache Software Foundation (ASF) under one
+# or more contributor license agreements.  See the NOTICE file
+# distributed with this work for additional information
+# regarding copyright ownership.  The ASF licenses this file
+# to you under the Apache License, Version 2.0 (the
+# "License"); you may not use this file except in compliance
+# with the License.  You may obtain a copy of the License at
+#
+#   http://www.apache.org/licenses/LICENSE-2.0
+#
+# Unless required by applicable law or agreed to in writing,
+# software distributed under the License is distributed on an
+# "AS IS" BASIS, WITHOUT WARRANTIES OR CONDITIONS OF ANY
+# KIND, either express or implied.  See the License for the
+# specific language governing permissions and limitations
+# under the License.
+#
+
+# need enable api
+#  
https://console.developers.google.com/apis/api/iam.googleapis.com/overview?project=750903720791

Review comment:
       Two comments:
   1) Could we not hardcode specific Google Cloud artifact references such as 
projects in comments or the code?
   2) Could we consider instead using the `google_project_service` block?  If 
so, one would need to unfortunately provide a `depends_on` meta-argument to 
resources depending on the `google_project_service`.  Alternatively, the API 
enablement could be added in the README as one of the pre-requisites documented 
prior to running the terraform workflow solution.

##########
File path: playground/terraform/modules/memorystore/main.tf
##########
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+#
+# Licensed to the Apache Software Foundation (ASF) under one
+# or more contributor license agreements.  See the NOTICE file
+# distributed with this work for additional information
+# regarding copyright ownership.  The ASF licenses this file
+# to you under the Apache License, Version 2.0 (the
+# "License"); you may not use this file except in compliance
+# with the License.  You may obtain a copy of the License at
+#
+#   http://www.apache.org/licenses/LICENSE-2.0
+#
+# Unless required by applicable law or agreed to in writing,
+# software distributed under the License is distributed on an
+# "AS IS" BASIS, WITHOUT WARRANTIES OR CONDITIONS OF ANY
+# KIND, either express or implied.  See the License for the
+# specific language governing permissions and limitations
+# under the License.
+#
+
+
+data "terraform_remote_state" "remote_state_vpc" {
+  backend = "gcs"
+  config = {
+    bucket  = "${var.beam_playground_terraform}"
+  }
+}
+
+
+resource "google_redis_instance" "cache" {
+  provider           = google-beta
+  project            = "${var.project_id}"
+#  region             = 
"${data.terraform_remote_state.remote_state_vpc.outputs.subnet_region}"
+  region              = "us-central1"
+  name               = "playground-backend-cache"
+  tier               = "BASIC"

Review comment:
       Since `BASIC` is default is this necessary?  More importantly, shouldn't 
we use `STANDARD_HA`?

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File path: playground/terraform/modules/memorystore/main.tf
##########
@@ -0,0 +1,43 @@
+#
+# Licensed to the Apache Software Foundation (ASF) under one
+# or more contributor license agreements.  See the NOTICE file
+# distributed with this work for additional information
+# regarding copyright ownership.  The ASF licenses this file
+# to you under the Apache License, Version 2.0 (the
+# "License"); you may not use this file except in compliance
+# with the License.  You may obtain a copy of the License at
+#
+#   http://www.apache.org/licenses/LICENSE-2.0
+#
+# Unless required by applicable law or agreed to in writing,
+# software distributed under the License is distributed on an
+# "AS IS" BASIS, WITHOUT WARRANTIES OR CONDITIONS OF ANY
+# KIND, either express or implied.  See the License for the
+# specific language governing permissions and limitations
+# under the License.
+#
+
+
+data "terraform_remote_state" "remote_state_vpc" {
+  backend = "gcs"
+  config = {
+    bucket  = "${var.beam_playground_terraform}"
+  }
+}
+
+
+resource "google_redis_instance" "cache" {
+  provider           = google-beta
+  project            = "${var.project_id}"
+#  region             = 
"${data.terraform_remote_state.remote_state_vpc.outputs.subnet_region}"
+  region              = "us-central1"
+  name               = "playground-backend-cache"
+  tier               = "BASIC"
+  memory_size_gb     = 16

Review comment:
       Can `memory_size_gb` be provided using a variable and that variable 
default to `16`?  Why was `16` chosen specifically?

##########
File path: playground/terraform/modules/memorystore/main.tf
##########
@@ -0,0 +1,43 @@
+#
+# Licensed to the Apache Software Foundation (ASF) under one
+# or more contributor license agreements.  See the NOTICE file
+# distributed with this work for additional information
+# regarding copyright ownership.  The ASF licenses this file
+# to you under the Apache License, Version 2.0 (the
+# "License"); you may not use this file except in compliance
+# with the License.  You may obtain a copy of the License at
+#
+#   http://www.apache.org/licenses/LICENSE-2.0
+#
+# Unless required by applicable law or agreed to in writing,
+# software distributed under the License is distributed on an
+# "AS IS" BASIS, WITHOUT WARRANTIES OR CONDITIONS OF ANY
+# KIND, either express or implied.  See the License for the
+# specific language governing permissions and limitations
+# under the License.
+#
+
+
+data "terraform_remote_state" "remote_state_vpc" {
+  backend = "gcs"
+  config = {
+    bucket  = "${var.beam_playground_terraform}"
+  }
+}
+
+
+resource "google_redis_instance" "cache" {
+  provider           = google-beta
+  project            = "${var.project_id}"
+#  region             = 
"${data.terraform_remote_state.remote_state_vpc.outputs.subnet_region}"
+  region              = "us-central1"
+  name               = "playground-backend-cache"
+  tier               = "BASIC"
+  memory_size_gb     = 16
+
+#  authorized_network = 
"${data.terraform_remote_state.remote_state_vpc.outputs.vpc_id}"

Review comment:
       Why are we no longer using a custom virtual private network?

##########
File path: playground/terraform/modules/memorystore/main.tf
##########
@@ -0,0 +1,43 @@
+#
+# Licensed to the Apache Software Foundation (ASF) under one
+# or more contributor license agreements.  See the NOTICE file
+# distributed with this work for additional information
+# regarding copyright ownership.  The ASF licenses this file
+# to you under the Apache License, Version 2.0 (the
+# "License"); you may not use this file except in compliance
+# with the License.  You may obtain a copy of the License at
+#
+#   http://www.apache.org/licenses/LICENSE-2.0
+#
+# Unless required by applicable law or agreed to in writing,
+# software distributed under the License is distributed on an
+# "AS IS" BASIS, WITHOUT WARRANTIES OR CONDITIONS OF ANY
+# KIND, either express or implied.  See the License for the
+# specific language governing permissions and limitations
+# under the License.
+#
+
+
+data "terraform_remote_state" "remote_state_vpc" {
+  backend = "gcs"
+  config = {
+    bucket  = "${var.beam_playground_terraform}"
+  }
+}
+
+
+resource "google_redis_instance" "cache" {

Review comment:
       Could we provide a comment describing the purpose caching is achieving 
for the Playground application?

##########
File path: playground/terraform/modules/account.tf
##########
@@ -0,0 +1,50 @@
+#
+# Licensed to the Apache Software Foundation (ASF) under one
+# or more contributor license agreements.  See the NOTICE file
+# distributed with this work for additional information
+# regarding copyright ownership.  The ASF licenses this file
+# to you under the Apache License, Version 2.0 (the
+# "License"); you may not use this file except in compliance
+# with the License.  You may obtain a copy of the License at
+#
+#   http://www.apache.org/licenses/LICENSE-2.0
+#
+# Unless required by applicable law or agreed to in writing,
+# software distributed under the License is distributed on an
+# "AS IS" BASIS, WITHOUT WARRANTIES OR CONDITIONS OF ANY
+# KIND, either express or implied.  See the License for the
+# specific language governing permissions and limitations
+# under the License.
+#
+
+# need enable api
+#  
https://console.developers.google.com/apis/api/iam.googleapis.com/overview?project=750903720791
+resource "google_service_account" "account" {
+  project            = "${var.project_id}"
+  account_id   = "${var.service_account}"
+  display_name = "${var.service_account}"
+}
+
+
+output "playground_service_account_id" {
+  value = "${google_service_account.account.account_id}"
+}
+
+
+resource "google_project_iam_binding" "account_iam_binding" {
+  for_each = toset([
+  "roles/dataflow.admin",
+  "roles/compute.storageAdmin",
+  "roles/iam.serviceAccountTokenCreator"

Review comment:
       What other service account is `google_service_account.account` 
impersonating?  Shouldn't we bind this directly to the service account to which 
we want `google_service_account.account` to impersonate?

##########
File path: playground/terraform/modules/account.tf
##########
@@ -0,0 +1,50 @@
+#
+# Licensed to the Apache Software Foundation (ASF) under one
+# or more contributor license agreements.  See the NOTICE file
+# distributed with this work for additional information
+# regarding copyright ownership.  The ASF licenses this file
+# to you under the Apache License, Version 2.0 (the
+# "License"); you may not use this file except in compliance
+# with the License.  You may obtain a copy of the License at
+#
+#   http://www.apache.org/licenses/LICENSE-2.0
+#
+# Unless required by applicable law or agreed to in writing,
+# software distributed under the License is distributed on an
+# "AS IS" BASIS, WITHOUT WARRANTIES OR CONDITIONS OF ANY
+# KIND, either express or implied.  See the License for the
+# specific language governing permissions and limitations
+# under the License.
+#
+
+# need enable api
+#  
https://console.developers.google.com/apis/api/iam.googleapis.com/overview?project=750903720791
+resource "google_service_account" "account" {
+  project            = "${var.project_id}"
+  account_id   = "${var.service_account}"
+  display_name = "${var.service_account}"
+}
+
+
+output "playground_service_account_id" {
+  value = "${google_service_account.account.account_id}"
+}
+
+
+resource "google_project_iam_binding" "account_iam_binding" {
+  for_each = toset([
+  "roles/dataflow.admin",
+  "roles/compute.storageAdmin",

Review comment:
       Is `roles/compute.storageAdmin` the minimal necessary to achieve the job 
function of the service account?

##########
File path: playground/terraform/modules/account.tf
##########
@@ -0,0 +1,50 @@
+#
+# Licensed to the Apache Software Foundation (ASF) under one
+# or more contributor license agreements.  See the NOTICE file
+# distributed with this work for additional information
+# regarding copyright ownership.  The ASF licenses this file
+# to you under the Apache License, Version 2.0 (the
+# "License"); you may not use this file except in compliance
+# with the License.  You may obtain a copy of the License at
+#
+#   http://www.apache.org/licenses/LICENSE-2.0
+#
+# Unless required by applicable law or agreed to in writing,
+# software distributed under the License is distributed on an
+# "AS IS" BASIS, WITHOUT WARRANTIES OR CONDITIONS OF ANY
+# KIND, either express or implied.  See the License for the
+# specific language governing permissions and limitations
+# under the License.
+#
+
+# need enable api
+#  
https://console.developers.google.com/apis/api/iam.googleapis.com/overview?project=750903720791
+resource "google_service_account" "account" {

Review comment:
       Please provide a `description` to communicate the intent of the service 
account.

##########
File path: playground/terraform/modules/memorystore/main.tf
##########
@@ -0,0 +1,43 @@
+#
+# Licensed to the Apache Software Foundation (ASF) under one
+# or more contributor license agreements.  See the NOTICE file
+# distributed with this work for additional information
+# regarding copyright ownership.  The ASF licenses this file
+# to you under the Apache License, Version 2.0 (the
+# "License"); you may not use this file except in compliance
+# with the License.  You may obtain a copy of the License at
+#
+#   http://www.apache.org/licenses/LICENSE-2.0
+#
+# Unless required by applicable law or agreed to in writing,
+# software distributed under the License is distributed on an
+# "AS IS" BASIS, WITHOUT WARRANTIES OR CONDITIONS OF ANY
+# KIND, either express or implied.  See the License for the
+# specific language governing permissions and limitations
+# under the License.
+#
+
+
+data "terraform_remote_state" "remote_state_vpc" {
+  backend = "gcs"
+  config = {
+    bucket  = "${var.beam_playground_terraform}"
+  }
+}
+
+
+resource "google_redis_instance" "cache" {
+  provider           = google-beta
+  project            = "${var.project_id}"
+#  region             = 
"${data.terraform_remote_state.remote_state_vpc.outputs.subnet_region}"
+  region              = "us-central1"

Review comment:
       Can `region` be provided using a variable and that variable default to 
`us-central1`?

##########
File path: playground/terraform/modules/memorystore/main.tf
##########
@@ -0,0 +1,43 @@
+#
+# Licensed to the Apache Software Foundation (ASF) under one
+# or more contributor license agreements.  See the NOTICE file
+# distributed with this work for additional information
+# regarding copyright ownership.  The ASF licenses this file
+# to you under the Apache License, Version 2.0 (the
+# "License"); you may not use this file except in compliance
+# with the License.  You may obtain a copy of the License at
+#
+#   http://www.apache.org/licenses/LICENSE-2.0
+#
+# Unless required by applicable law or agreed to in writing,
+# software distributed under the License is distributed on an
+# "AS IS" BASIS, WITHOUT WARRANTIES OR CONDITIONS OF ANY
+# KIND, either express or implied.  See the License for the
+# specific language governing permissions and limitations
+# under the License.
+#
+
+
+data "terraform_remote_state" "remote_state_vpc" {
+  backend = "gcs"
+  config = {
+    bucket  = "${var.beam_playground_terraform}"
+  }
+}
+
+
+resource "google_redis_instance" "cache" {
+  provider           = google-beta
+  project            = "${var.project_id}"
+#  region             = 
"${data.terraform_remote_state.remote_state_vpc.outputs.subnet_region}"

Review comment:
       Instead of commenting out, should this be deleted?

##########
File path: playground/terraform/modules/memorystore/variables.tf
##########
@@ -0,0 +1,31 @@
+#
+# Licensed to the Apache Software Foundation (ASF) under one
+# or more contributor license agreements.  See the NOTICE file
+# distributed with this work for additional information
+# regarding copyright ownership.  The ASF licenses this file
+# to you under the Apache License, Version 2.0 (the
+# "License"); you may not use this file except in compliance
+# with the License.  You may obtain a copy of the License at
+#
+#   http://www.apache.org/licenses/LICENSE-2.0
+#
+# Unless required by applicable law or agreed to in writing,
+# software distributed under the License is distributed on an
+# "AS IS" BASIS, WITHOUT WARRANTIES OR CONDITIONS OF ANY
+# KIND, either express or implied.  See the License for the
+# specific language governing permissions and limitations
+# under the License.
+#
+
+variable "project_id" {
+  description = "The GCP Project ID where Playground Applications will be 
created"
+}
+
+variable "redis_version" {
+  description = "The GCP Project ID where Playground Applications will be 
created"
+  default     = "REDIS_6_X" 
+}
+
+variable "beam_playground_terraform" {

Review comment:
       Should this just be a `local` instead?




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